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    Here is a link to my poem Bleak House, published in a magazine called From Dusk 2 Dawn. Scroll towards the back and you'll find it

    http://issuu.com/fromdusk2dawn/docs/..._11_structure2

    Also, here is the poem that won me a merit prize for the Nottingham Open Poetry competition last year, and was published in the literary journal ASSENT, a magazine which I now have an internship with. They don't have an online presence as yet, so here is the poem as it was published, and underneath is another version of it, because I've made a few edits over the past year:

    The Breathing Night

    Below the white gaze lie fields of corn
    infinite carpets spread
    beneath naked soles.

    Here I could surely step
    over each foot-provoking stone
    arriving at some thought-trodden place -

    at the sadness of a beautiful thing unrealised
    and the voicelessness of something dark
    yet never quite black.


    And here it is in it's most recent form.

    The Breathing Night

    Below the white gaze lie cornfields
    Like carpets that stretch to the skyline.

    Infinite before these naked soles
    The rubble of new collapses.

    Here I could surely step
    Over each foot-provoking stone

    Only to reach the absence
    Of everything missed

    The silence of darkness,
    Empty, and endless


    Hope you enjoy!
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    Your back! Nice to see a local being published!

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    Thanks From Dusk 2 Dawn magazine is free and distributed in a lot of public areas in Derby, so next time you're in town keep an eye out!!
    'He bowed low, right down to the ground, in front of the man sitting there motionless, whose smile reminded him of everything that he had ever loved in his life, of everything that had ever been of value and holy in his life.' Herman Hesse

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    I suspect you'd be a natural at wreath poetry.

    love your work.
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    You're great and I loved it! More please? +rep

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