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    Traveler NPRussell is on a distinguished road

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    Default A Poem - My first

    Hi all,

    I thought my second post should be some kind of writing, so here goes!

    Essential Obsession

    I share my mind with appetite
    Therapy from time to time
    Contamination inhalation
    Of the habitual kind

    Cowed by what I have become
    Slave to essential obsession
    Hating me and only me
    Eyes open yet I cannot see

    I hold myself in disdain
    Deemed esteemed insane
    I'm inclined to find solution
    In my own retribution

    I tell myself I'm fine
    Am I just spinning lies?
    I vowed to you I would
    Why can't I end it now for good?


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    cool...

    Nice to have another poet.
    You should explore the "Bird and Bear and Hare and Fish" threads as there are many poetry related topics.
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    I very much like the verbal rhythmn u set down in ur poem
    if the worlds gonna end then let's get it over with, i got shit to do

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