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    Default Poetry or Lyrics created by We Constant Readers

    I will start with this one. It came to me in a flash and within 90 seconds it was on paper....

    Faded

    Faded is my memory of her
    Like the sides of an old abandoned barn
    She is running, playing
    In sunlight, her hair so fine

    Shadows creep along the hall
    growing, as I fail to recall
    Why she had to take her leave
    while I can no longer dream

    If, through to the end I
    make a stand, again
    It would be to know that she
    may have a memory of me

    That my love has no bounds
    as I wither away in the ground
    That she had no pain or doubt
    Through her life without

    Knowing that I gave her a beginning
    if not a life, not in spite
    but free to be all that she
    can and will be

    In the end it is just a memory
    of her running in the sun
    her hair so free, smiling
    dancing with the wind

    At her back I linger,
    like the wind, pushing her
    as I was once with her,
    a guide and a light...

    She smiled, and I was free
    a memory touched
    a memory
    a memory
    Fading....
    Faded....


    'but not for you Gunslinger, never for you. you darkle. you tinct. may I be brutally frank? You Go on.'

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    I like this Vast!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Very good VastOne.
    I have no faith in human perfectability. I think that human exertion will have no appreciable effect upon humanity. Man is now only more active - not more happy - nor more wise, than he was 6000 years ago. - Edgar Allan Poe

    Bunch together a group of people deliberately chosen for strong religious feelings, and you have a practical guarantee of dark morbidities expressed in crime, perversion, and insanity. - H.P. Lovecraft

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    Thank you both....

    They say to write about what you know, this is an ode to my daughter whom I have not been able to see for 5 years..... She is now 7, and was only 2 the last time...

    I said I would not share this info, but I think Ka may be working now having me relate such a painful thing, only here, where in a very very short time, feels like home...

    The poem is therapy...and as honest as I have ever been

    Terry


    'but not for you Gunslinger, never for you. you darkle. you tinct. may I be brutally frank? You Go on.'

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    And in effective therapy one must lay one's soul bare.

    I have done as much in my:

    Poetry

    and

    Prose
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    And in effective therapy one must lay one's soul bare.

    I have done as much in my:
    Jon,

    I am deeply touched...

    thank you for sharing these...I will begin writing more and share here as well

    Well done, Wordsmith Gunslinger...

    And your dog was a grand and faithful champion who is now in the finest meadow chasing butterflies and waiting ....


    'but not for you Gunslinger, never for you. you darkle. you tinct. may I be brutally frank? You Go on.'

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    Thank you Vast...we are well met!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    it makes me very sad. sadder even to know for whom it was written. i am sorry for your loss, but pleased to know that you are able to write about it with such grace.

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    Poetry is such a beautiful thing. Writing is the only thing that connects us all.
    I have no faith in human perfectability. I think that human exertion will have no appreciable effect upon humanity. Man is now only more active - not more happy - nor more wise, than he was 6000 years ago. - Edgar Allan Poe

    Bunch together a group of people deliberately chosen for strong religious feelings, and you have a practical guarantee of dark morbidities expressed in crime, perversion, and insanity. - H.P. Lovecraft

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    I tried my and at pure horror poetry. Here

    I had one positive comment and I wondered, even though I write "dark" poetry, if I was "out of my element" with it.
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    Candice is a prose MACHINE!!! Candice's work
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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