Good work.
Great imagery!
Good work.
Great imagery!
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
God...I keep losing concentration. Two lines in and I lose the concept!!
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
You can do it, Jon!
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Damn it!
Damn it!
Janet!
Janet!
My favorite song from the movie!
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
I almost named Majel Janet because I love that movie so much, and I love that song so much, because then I could sing to her: "Dammitt! Janet! I love you....."
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enough chatting, kiddoes!
more candy poetry, please!
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
my heart
erratic
beating
against
your palm
CANDY stains
and cigarettes ashes
i feel the madness
inside
your mouth
breakfast
in bed
you have
discovered
my addiction
im kind of inspired..
here's one more
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You often chase love
in the series of those
cigarette butts
while mine lies
if not in the bottom
of this CANDY JAR
its inside your
bottomless mouth,
which i think slowly
kills us both…
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Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)
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niceOriginally Posted by Smokey
They grind to powder between my molars
I like the way I have to be careful when unwrapping them so they don't fall out
At first they're sweet as plastic kisses
But after my fifth pack they burn my tongue
I keep unrolling and grinding the cylinders to dust
In the morning I'll probably regret
This smarties bender
if the worlds gonna end then let's get it over with, i got shit to do
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
hurting teeth, hurting mind
damn that candy oh so fine
in my mouth i feel it melt
slip down my throat in one go
i sit and look at the empty bag
and feel empty inside.
need more sweets and candy too
chocolate, biscuits anything at all
watch out watch out i may eat you too
hurting teeth, hurting mind
damn that candy oh so fine
in my mouth i feel it melt
slip down my throat in one go
i sit and look at the empty bag
and feel empty inside.
need more sweets and candy too
chocolate, biscuits anything at all
watch out watch out i may eat you toohell yeah
if the worlds gonna end then let's get it over with, i got shit to do
luv ithurting teeth, hurting mind
damn that candy oh so fine
in my mouth i feel it melt
slip down my throat in one go
i sit and look at the empty bag
and feel empty inside.
need more sweets and candy too
chocolate, biscuits anything at all
watch out watch out i may eat you too
takes on new meaning when we consider your name.hurting teeth, hurting mind
damn that candy oh so fine
in my mouth i feel it melt
slip down my throat in one go
i sit and look at the empty bag
and feel empty inside.
need more sweets and candy too
chocolate, biscuits anything at all
watch out watch out i may eat you too
i know
Bonbon Holocaust
A quick glance round for confirmation
Of larceny without observation
My nimble fingers pry the lid
Where sweet, unattended treasure’s hid
The pungent fragrance hits the nose
And in the mouth saliva flows
In greedy, sinful anticipation
Of unbridled confectionery adoration.
Damn the doctor
Damn the waist
Damn the diet
I want that taste
Of heavenly chocolate
On my tongue
It’s too late now
The crime’s begun
Don’t bother me
Don’t be a pest
I’m starting up this
Chocolate-fest
My victims
Housed in paper cup
Fall one-by-one
As I unashamedly sup
On squares and rounds and shapes galore
First one, then two then more and more
Each offering up its tender flesh
So sweet, delectable and fresh
My feast continues unabated
Until, at last, my need’s been sated.
I snap out of my gluttonous fury
And focus eyes, dazed and blurry
One step above a sugar coma
Mouth guilty with the sweet aroma
The damage, total and complete
I’ve eaten every single treat!
I quickly cover up the scene
Where I exterminated children of the cacao bean
I can offer no defense,
There can be no excuse.
I’m going now to find myself
A comfy place to snooze.
Grrr...
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
yummy!
Nice one Gabe, good to see something with a rhyming scheme from you. I like it.
Sloth Love Chunk
Thanks, Brownings_Childe. I don't really care much for rhyming verse, honestly. While it is a challenge to make the rhyme, it seems contrived to me.
But thank you for the compliment.
Isn't all literature contrived, silly?
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
What I was trying (and miserably failing) to say is that my own rhyming poems sound contrived to myself. Chasing after a rhyme, I feel I sometimes mitigate the intent of the poem.
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