The Flower Girl:
Okay, let's clear it up: this story has everything the rest of Letti's have: a sweet, short parabolic tale of beauty that resonates with each word. I enjoyed this fable every much, but I still think it fell short of perfect. Maybe it's the pessimist in me, but I can't shake the feeling. Sorry.
Final Grade: A-
"I aim to misbehave."
-- Malcolm Reynolds
"I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I soar."
-- Hoban Washburne
"What does that make us?"
"Big damn heroes, sir."
"Ain't we just."
-- Malcolm Reynolds and Zoe Washburne
Ah yes, I remember this one from DTnet too. Nice to read it again here. Beautiful tale Letti.
Letti, you write truely amazing, and I read Robert, at your request, many times
You are truely talented, keep up the good work
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