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    I am a soliloquy without an audience,
    Spoken by an unknown actor.
    There will be no top billing
    I am the runner-up,
    Acting these scenes in my head.
    But the spotlight burns my eyes,
    So I pull the curtain for the star
    For this opera of one.

    If words can be a weapon,
    Then you're the bullet to my gun
    And it cannot fire without one.
    And If pictures are worth a thosand words
    Then what does this painting say,
    of a king of hearts buried by a spade?

    I'm a winning hand with no chips to bet
    Well I'm all in,
    Going to drown on the river.
    And If I buy back in -
    double or nothing -
    I'll lose to a full house,
    Because I'm never even dealt a pair.
    In this game of one.

    And if the truth can hurt
    You'd better grab a wheelchair
    Because you won't be able walk.
    And If it's true, what goes, comes
    When I'm handed back my heart
    I'll need a defribulator for it to start.

    I'm willing to fight, to fight and die
    For freedom and a little piece of mind.
    But it's impossible to fight the war
    Grasping a heavy but empty gun.
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    Re: Unarmed

    I really really like it. Especially this verse:

    Quote Originally Posted by Mattrick View Post
    If words can be a weapon,
    Then you're the bullet to my gun
    And it cannot fire without one.
    And If pictures are worth a thosand words
    Then what does this painting say,
    of a king of hearts buried by a spade?
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    Last edited by Odetta; 01-23-2014 at 11:47 AM.

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    Re: Unarmed

    Yeah, the first line and that part were in my head for days and I just wrote around them basically. Generally I hate rhyming at times because it can feel contrived so I tend to only rhyme when it works.
    Last edited by Odetta; 01-23-2014 at 11:47 AM.
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