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Thread: Poetry in Winter - Winter in Poetry Poll.

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    Default Poetry in Winter - Winter in Poetry Poll.

    Pick a winner!



    From flaggwalkstheline



    Cannibalized Poem # 12 (to keep your hands warm, crumple this up in your pocket)

    So go on then

    My carbon monoxide Cinderella

    Continue with your bedtime red wine pillowdrooling story

    Even though the pages are yellowed where they aren’t covered in ivy and chewed by rodents

    Even though I have forgotten your ashen licorice name

    The teakettle is boiling with freshly caught nettles

    To keep us strong it is best to not remember a lullaby strong enough to put itself to sleep

    I remember your wispy flesh on an unswept floor

    I stood upon your barren whispering shores

    And told a pile of bones and a silent body of dark ocean motioning

    To listen to my battlecry as I planted my flag in the dust and declared all of it as mine

    And then I turned around and marched my starved boots back toward the bristling treeline

    Go on

    The necessary hand motions have been made

    Cut off all your hair in the bathroom mirror with a pair of orange handled scissors

    Open that cobalt-blue magic suitcase

    And show me what chalkmark treasures you’re hiding

    I’m hiding under lead lined sleeping bags and under wooden desks while the film rolls on

    Flickering on yellow wallpaper

    Would you block out the nightlight’s glow by trying to take in as much of it as possible?

    Flickering, flickering, flickering

    Out!

    The bespectacled bird makes a jump from here and dissapears

    To hear an unsung song your voice must first become undone

    Lining it’s nest with newspaper and fur

    The headline’s always changing but the ink remains the same

    The film rolls on and crushes our other concrete toys

    Under a heavy-lidded cinderblock fantasy

    These deep voiced candles leave a meteoric impact crater

    The scented wax burns my ungloved fingers and threatens the cataract in my eye

    And the whining of a hallucinated piano lingers

    So go on then

    You crafter of tangerine dream high fructose trickery

    Hoist your sore throated glass masterwork upwards

    Bungee drop it spidering into the fields

    And spend the rest of the shimmery afternoon digging up the pieces

    Ripping up the roots and threads of what you have sewn

    Turn a century-browned key in a twinkling lock and see if the middle aged door opens

    If a starslick oily machine can crawl from the water imitating its maker’s reptilian clockstomper ancestry

    Then I will leave the irritated and infected black and red last stitch in peace on the meat

    I chew up the serpentine chunks but cannot digest the bricks and mud

    The pointed sticks poking out of a flood

    No matter how often I get these earthquakingly hopeful dry-heaves

    I cannot spit out this buttery frosted over cracked pane between-us-and-them headache

    And when the neon honeydew astro-turfwar poison reaches your teed off brain

    Will you finally remember to write me a sloppy thank-you note?

    Because if you can remember despite your pristine porcelain teeth and weaponless sheath

    I did tell you under the covers with a flashlight and a runny nose

    I told you sitting in the barefoot moonlight

    When we swapped skin, fire and adjectives

    I told you that despite this brief goosepimpled meeting at the midnight crossroads

    Despite the impenetrable shield of sweaty handed laughter and scribbled notes with fresh nicknames

    That sooner or later even though the color bleeds through to the other side of the paper

    No matter how often we fill out the necessary paperwork

    Dot the I’s and cross the T’s in our best handwriting

    Just like they tried to teach us

    No matter how often we successfully avoid strange predatory questions

    By huddling close under a blanket of our own propaganda

    We succumb to an as yet unmade cliché

    We can stand in defiance of the cold together

    But

    We all face the night alone




    From Brownings Childe


    Graybeard



    The old man nods his hoary head,
    Lets blow his rimy breath.
    His whispered, incoherent words,
    Convey a frozen death.

    He blots the sun, and claims the earth,
    His sovereignty complete.
    No blade of grass escapes his reign.
    Each tree admits defeat.

    Upon the land, he spreads his cloak,
    An alabaster tomb.
    Interred beneath this arctic shroud,
    The sun may not exhume.

    But when the spring comes 'round again,
    The sun may grant reprieve.
    The wheel of life begins anew,
    As Winter takes his leave.
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    From The hottest Mod…Ms. O!
    winter
    cold
    callous
    unforgiving

    i
    sit
    waiting for spring
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    From Lady Pornbot Hitchiker


    Bad Roads
    The autonomy
    of cars
    brings my misanthropy
    of drivers
    the ice covers the roads
    and yet fast they go
    no turn signals
    no warning of movement
    they may end up regretful
    freezing rain covers the white pavement
    skating rink roads ensue
    no salt yet to lessen the agonizing plight
    and so
    I drive in fear.
    _______________



    From Jon




    Chemical Warfare



    Born of simple dirt, we are just “Dust in the Wind.”

    You treat us so badly. How have we sinned?

    I and my kin work hard to make you a quilt.

    A blanket of white, we lay on everything you’ve built.

    You grumble and moan; but more than that

    After I fall far and hit hard concrete and lay flat

    You send a metal, fossil fueled beast to throw us aside.

    The beast leaves a chemical agent behind, access denied.

    An agent left behind to kill those who come after me.

    I lay at the side, watching my kin die, you ignore my plea.

    But my kin become water to make the concrete icy.



    From Gabe


    Simple water,
    Discreetly packaged
    Crystallized
    In symmetry

    Unique in form
    From any other
    Falling slow
    On bitter winds

    Spiraling downward
    By the billions
    Amidst the shrieking
    Of birthing clouds

    To barren earth
    That hides beneath
    The crushing weight
    Of clotted legions

    Knotted, twisting
    Frozen blanket
    Rising, falling
    Undulation

    Waxing, waning
    Creeping rhythm
    Glacial swells of
    Simple water.


    From candy


    Winters a bitch
    She bites, she hurts. she rips out your life
    You daren’t look her full in the face as you know
    She will whip at your face with her
    Velvetine claws
    You huddle inside
    Cold to the bone
    She’s vicious she is evil with no conscious thought
    Each one of her breathes is a shard to the skin
    Your lips are frozen into a corpse like grin
    As you brave the full force of her wrath
    She is darkness she is despair she is all that is bad
    In times you think she will thaw out a bit
    But she fights back and she hurts all in her path
    The old and the young are her first easy prey
    But you know she is coming for you
    You suffer in silent despair
    Not knowing that all the world is in black
    You think you’re alone and its you that she hates
    But she hates everyone and would kill in a stroke
    As you sit in pitch black not daring to breath
    You know she is at the door waiting
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    as usual, bears hesitate between BROWNING'S and Jon... both poems are so really good!

    (and, of course, O., the hottest mod ever, wins every time, whether or not she submits anything! )

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    It's useless, I can not decide on one.
    They are great everyone, love them.
    Sorry for whoever wins ..you'll do it
    with out my vote this time.

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jean View Post
    as usual, bears hesitate between BROWNING'S and Jon... both poems are so really good!

    (and, of course, O., the hottest mod ever, wins every time, whether or not she submits anything! )


    I vote Gabe
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Odetta View Post
    I vote Gabe
    Wha!!!!

    Thanks!
    Grrr...

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    bump

    ( already? )
    if the worlds gonna end then let's get it over with, i got shit to do

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    YAY! Someone voted for me (and it wasn't me!)

    *twirls around the room*
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Odetta View Post
    YAY! Someone voted for me (and it wasn't me!)

    *twirls around the room*


    That's just the room spinning, dear.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    same difference
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    After much deliberation, I have voted for Gabe. Still rather dissapointed that there was no entry from Bears....his was my favorite last time by far.
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    thank you BROWNING'S! bears are very sorry they couldn't participate this time...

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    I think the poll is accurate to the talent displayed.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    May I say...as a paying member to a poetry site...the talent at DT.com puts the pay site to shame... on free levels.

    If one adds in the riddles at DT.com.... the pay site should be paying!


    I thank you all.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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