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I am not sure. I hear the voice of the narrator in this sentence, parcellated as it is.

shit, I saw it was on the "thread with new posts" list and thought you finally wrote something
"Disappointed!" (A Fish Called Wanda)

waiting! WAITING!!!

http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k291/mishemplushem/Facilitation/madteddy.gif

DD, did you fucking have to stop at this moment? When will I see the rest???!!!!!

The only thing I am not totally happy about is the dialog (still). Everything I said in my previous post here...

I have read, and I want more.

It actually reads like literature, which is something beginner authors rarely achieve, - as opposed to a creative writing exercise. It flows, it is interesting, and I...

reading now, and you know what? actually enjoying! will post when I'm through, but I am reading slowly. Disregard the post right below this one, I'll make notes there, and edit everything into a...