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Hi, I'll get to the lovecraft rap tomorrow hopefully, it's way too late for me now.

Just wanted to say I really liked the Denny's poem. Conjures some vivid images, I was just wondering if the...

Thanks guys - I'm looking for some input on this - very new, the ink is still wet on it if you like so I'm officially too close to it at the moment. Any and all thoughts please.


Bittersweet

...

Thank you both - very grateful for the kind words and just really glad you like them.

Of pool and as it happens, life...


metaphor


it is
simply

Thanks Flagg ;)

Ok, just a few left now, I'm saving my (current) favourite for last so until then.



lonely


felt it again today,

6.



“I'm sorry, I hate to interrupt but did you say 'sunup'?”



The voice was quiet but strong, there was a hint of curiosity in it and something else as well, excitement perhaps? Even...

Thanks to Jon and Smokey :D Getting to the end of these now, the longer stuff has been taking over of late...


untitled


and so she asks me

'what's the matter?'

5.

He rose at his usual time, remembering the night's events as he dressed, replaying moments, savouring them a second time. He prepared, readied himself for it like a man about to step out into a...

Thanks Jon, appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment.

This is a little different, I saw a friends band - Hope & Social (not sure what the links policy allows in this case but if you...

Ok so irrespective of whether anyone's interested... :evil:

4.

The knock was quiet but sure. He was surprised to feel a little thrill of excitement as he crossed the room to the door. She stood...

security


i need the words to be seamless,
unbroken.

i need the comfort that they bring.

they let me be
somewhere,

3.

He fell easily into a routine, rising late, afternoons in the bar watching them, learning the town's secrets through it's people. How they interacted with each-other and most importantly with...

look harder


there is always
victory.

sometimes it wears the clothes
of defeat

but

The finklestein shit kid rides again - it desperately spits it's bleakly resigned anger and says (to me), it's going to get f*cked up and you probably can't change it so treat it like a backdrop and...

In case anyone's interested...

2.

He'd arrived about a month before; almost slouching into what passed for the town proper at dusk atop a tall, disinterested bay. He had an elegant insouciance...

Thanks very much :D


living alone



people asked me

'do you like it?'

Ok, so this is the latest 'challenge' - 'vampire, horse, tree'. I'm going to post it in sections because it's a bit long.


1.

'If only they knew.'

He had to concentrate fully to throttle a...

pause


and there is a moment,
luminous,
even as you are
telling me
that it's stupid.

a moment in your eyes,

Ok, so bear with me for a moment...(this isn't meant as a criticism)

Perhaps it's because this is one of the longest poems of yours, thus allowing me to fully experience the sensation, but it...

Hannah - glad you liked it and a big thank you for taking the time to leave a comment - very much appreciated :) On the hands thing - it's a very good point :doh: - one of those 'it's clear in my...

realise


holding onto the good.

[death grip]

just a little too tight.

[palpable want.