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Hannah:

thanks, i honestly don't think i could have written it before having a child of my own. my boy is two and half and he likes rocks as well. 2T and smaller sized pants pockets can be rather...

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i like your sentence and paragraph structure. it flows well and easy on the eyes to read. vocabulary is good too. good descriptive words.

and i loved the clown's line:
i struggle with writing...

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*applauds*
i love it.

as for the poem then song then short story transition, i know about that. most people don't seem to care for what comes out the other side. take a gander at:...

I hate to ever discourage or criticize someone else, but I just wanted to point out one thing that jumped out at me. i don't know if you've seen the movie Signs by M. Night Shyamalan, but the scene...

not sure if this topic is still relevant or not. personally when i have a block i'll do a few different things depending on how i feel and what i can do.

wait - give it some time, give it some...

my (what I call) "main story" that I've have simmering on the back burner for 10 years now, I went through and wrote about 20 pages of an outline and certain early scenes of the (what at least in my...

should have read the second page.

a list of things. i've found in my writing that as the writer you in most cases see every little detail of what is in you'r character's wallet, in their pockets, purse, kitchen cabinets, so on, and...

I forgot tabs don't work on here. Oh well.
Another "flash fiction" by me that I'm posting on here until I can finish one my of my other stories, and share it.

I'm happy to hear what you think...

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Thanks for the reply.
I considered writing more to the story, but for now I'm leaving it right where it is. When I wrote the story, I wrote it as I saw it.
Figure that either a) I see the rest of...

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