After re-writing again it's amazing how wooden all this is lol Like this:
"Junkies live as if crossing a tightrope where every step is a struggle towards survival and throttling winds make every...
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After re-writing again it's amazing how wooden all this is lol Like this:
"Junkies live as if crossing a tightrope where every step is a struggle towards survival and throttling winds make every...
So I'm almost 200 pages into my re-write and I've re-written the entire book from scratch, using the first draft only as a guide getting rid of the useless description and expostion. It's looking...
Re: The Need
That's a good point Jean, funny that I never noticed that. I've been very careful of my pronouns especially if it should be a form of reveal. I'm writing a chapter like that where,...
Re: The Need
Sentence length really varies depending on the syntactic structure I'm using. The short sentences are periodic, more often than not for description and emphasis. When the...
I'm over halfway through my re-write and, essentially, I want to post some excerpts in here of passages I'm either happy with to see how they read to others, or passages that have frustated me to no...