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You're gonna start George R.R Martin'ng me? Fuck, I need to work on creating some more characters.

Characters that you care about.

Characters that you really, really care about.

Characters...

Yeah, I'm still with you on the dialog. Why I re-watched the whole of Life on Mars over the weekend, so I could study the characters and see how the dialogue played out and- lol, jk, I just...

About half of it, actually. Finally worked out what to write before the roof this weekend. Soon as I was done, just had to post it after giving it a quick read through. It's why it's a little untidy,...

2 – The Fall

Ok, I’ll be honest with you here, I know this was a pretty major turning point in my life and all that, but with the exception of a little while before and during The Fall itself,...

Ok, well thanks a ton for the feedback, bears. Yeah, dialogue between two characters is something i need to work on more, i think, but i'm very grateful for any criticism you can provide, especially...

Absolutely. This is very much a work in progress. In fact, one idea that i thought could be a major plot point I recently thought to be unworkable. Anyway, will post more later in the week.

1 – Prom Night
Once upon a time, I had a good life. It wasn’t perfect, I wasn’t exactly the most popular kid in school, and maybe I wasn’t happy with a few choices I had made, but it was a good...