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    After re-writing again it's amazing how wooden...

    After re-writing again it's amazing how wooden all this is lol Like this:

    "Junkies live as if crossing a tightrope where every step is a struggle towards survival and throttling winds make every...
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    So I'm almost 200 pages into my re-write and I've...

    So I'm almost 200 pages into my re-write and I've re-written the entire book from scratch, using the first draft only as a guide getting rid of the useless description and expostion. It's looking...
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    Re: The Need That's a good point Jean, funny...

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    That's a good point Jean, funny that I never noticed that. I've been very careful of my pronouns especially if it should be a form of reveal. I'm writing a chapter like that where,...
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    Re: The Need Sentence length really...

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    Sentence length really varies depending on the syntactic structure I'm using. The short sentences are periodic, more often than not for description and emphasis. When the...
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    Selected Excerpts from my Novel - The Need

    I'm over halfway through my re-write and, essentially, I want to post some excerpts in here of passages I'm either happy with to see how they read to others, or passages that have frustated me to no...
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