Sorry I didn't notice you'd made the point already. Probably with less text than me too. ;)
I thought I had read through them all too, but I probably breezed through quickly and just forgot.
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Type: Posts; User: Brainslinger
Sorry I didn't notice you'd made the point already. Probably with less text than me too. ;)
I thought I had read through them all too, but I probably breezed through quickly and just forgot.
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I didn't have a problem with the dog coming out of nowhere. I also agree that it wasn't unplanned since it was described earlier in the story.
I do wonder if it would have worked though. I'm...