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    I'm looking forward to a sea shanty from you.

    I'm looking forward to a sea shanty from you.
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    Hmmm...Now I'm hearing it to the tune of Rat...

    Hmmm...Now I'm hearing it to the tune of Rat Salad AND Electric Funeral. But it seems more like a War Pigs tune. But Jean was right about the whole Sabbath idea.
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    Aquaman was my favorite as a young boy.

    Aquaman was my favorite as a young boy.
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    It has been some time since I wrote anything. ...

    It has been some time since I wrote anything.

    This particular poem is...well, about 1/4 of it was quite forced. I want to get back to writing but I see there will be "pains." I figure a...
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    Thank you. I didn't see those things.

    Thank you. I didn't see those things.
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    This is my first work in I think...over a year. I...

    This is my first work in I think...over a year. I have a few lines in files here and there but this is the only thing close to complete. I do need feedback. I fear I may have lost something. I think...
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    You simply must. We love variety here. If you...

    You simply must. We love variety here. If you cannot find your notebook; start a thread, write a poem, and keep writing. Perhaps then your notebook will show up.
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    Thank you sir.

    Thank you sir.
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    Just some snippets I may use some...

    Just some snippets I may use some day...somewhere. Any input or suggestions are most welcome. I am torn on where to take these works or to take bits and pieces and make several works.



    The...
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    A work in progress. Please do not judge too...

    A work in progress. Please do not judge too harshly...yet.



    The Human Kidney stone


    So they say in a loving tone “This too shall pass.”

    A famous most phrase we all hear and...
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    Biochemical Beasts of Burden

    Biochemical Beasts of Burden
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    Symbolism of my current predicament. Good eye to...

    Symbolism of my current predicament. Good eye to catch that.
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    Hope the lover of fishermen A cruel lover...

    Hope the lover of fishermen

    A cruel lover we call Hope

    Hope… the wish of racers

    Perhaps the game will bite

    Perhaps the car will finish first
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    Thank you.

    Thank you.
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    http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff79/walterodim...

    http://i239.photobucket.com/albums/ff79/walterodim_photos/thirdbase.jpg



    I see hidden things on people’s faces.

    She hates her tight, cramped, fashionable new shoes

    The next...
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    The Beach With No Ocean. ...

    The Beach With No Ocean.



    Fettered, tattered limbs cry out to be free

    Muted voices seek an audience for grievance

    A lone “savior” comes from the mighty West
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    Thank you both!

    Thank you both!
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    Mother and Winter Divorce ...

    Mother and Winter Divorce



    MARCH!

    A command

    A strong verb.
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    Michael Jackson’s other glove


    Feeling lonely; a little out of place

    Like a gumball in a gravel pit

    With no one around to chew it.

    Home alone; a vast, empty space
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    Thank you. I find slant rhyme very awkward.

    Thank you. I find slant rhyme very awkward.
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