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  1. You're gonna start George R.R Martin'ng me? Fuck,...

    You're gonna start George R.R Martin'ng me? Fuck, I need to work on creating some more characters.

    Characters that you care about.

    Characters that you really, really care about.

    Characters...
  2. Yeah, I'm still with you on the dialog. Why I...

    Yeah, I'm still with you on the dialog. Why I re-watched the whole of Life on Mars over the weekend, so I could study the characters and see how the dialogue played out and- lol, jk, I just...
  3. About half of it, actually. Finally worked out...

    About half of it, actually. Finally worked out what to write before the roof this weekend. Soon as I was done, just had to post it after giving it a quick read through. It's why it's a little untidy,...
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    2 – The Fall

    Ok, I’ll be honest with you here, I know this was a pretty major turning point in my life and all that, but with the exception of a little while before and during The Fall itself,...
  5. Ok, well thanks a ton for the feedback, bears....

    Ok, well thanks a ton for the feedback, bears. Yeah, dialogue between two characters is something i need to work on more, i think, but i'm very grateful for any criticism you can provide, especially...
  6. Absolutely. This is very much a work in progress....

    Absolutely. This is very much a work in progress. In fact, one idea that i thought could be a major plot point I recently thought to be unworkable. Anyway, will post more later in the week.
  7. Chronicles of Des Smith, Volume 1: The Damned

    1 – Prom Night
    Once upon a time, I had a good life. It wasn’t perfect, I wasn’t exactly the most popular kid in school, and maybe I wasn’t happy with a few choices I had made, but it was a good...
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