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why don't you post it here, too?

actually, we are doing Each time I look at you. But if someone hasn't done any of the previous, they are very welcome to do so any time!...

yes, because it was a brilliant line! http://i91.photobucket.com/albums/k291/mishemplushem/Facilitation/bear_tongue.gif

::scratches himself behind the ear::

alinda's turn

ok then, I just thought it could be, you know, the same poem but in different posts. I am afraid it would be separate entries in the Index; look at it tomorrow and tell me how you would like to alter...

fantastic! another Great One is here, please please write and post more and more! The bear is very excited and very impressed!

hopefully, I will be able to come up with something like critics...

ok

Don't cry for me, cry for yourselves

could that be you?

I am honored.[/QUOTE]

I suggest the next round's first line being any of the three lines of this haiku by Jon:

On nightmare’s silent edge

Self doubt erodes sanity

Pushing the sleeper over

that Fruno's poem is one of his best indeed

I wish he would reappear as soon as possible, and post more and more; I already know most of his poems by heart (the rhyming ones at least), and I'm...

John said he would post today.

I will comment, sooner or later, because besides mere form there's a lot of other interesting things in those poems. (Wish I had more time...)

thank you Fruno, I hope you'll post in all other poetry circle threads, too!

Yes. That's what I called culture. There was a time poetry was unthinkable without adherence to strict rules (in addition to the examples you gave, I could also remind classical French Ballad with...

A poet doesn't have to study poetry. Of course you don't measure syllables, why the hell? What a sorry sight would that be, a poet endeavoring to satisfy some mythical "requirements"... having an...

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JohnBlaze went to Mexico...

but he'll be back! And there'll be another Thursday!

Friends, let's wait till next...

His King is dead by The Nameless is another example of what I tried to express above.

The layout of the poem is perfect (even if the rhyming is sloppy and the meter stumbling - although the...

interesting... I was just going to argue that you were... I am still going to do so tomorrow morning (it's about 90F now, weather gone crazy once again here).

I wish people would post more comments: I do believe free verse here should be analyzed by those who understand it. I hope with time they will. I also hope there'll be 36 hours in a day instead of...