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Rise
i lie awake at night
searching for whats right
looking intot the dark
and searching for my heart
trying to have something real
somthing that makes me feel
wanting to find my way
hoping i’ll rise today
hearing all the bad songs
wondering how i got so wrong
i thought i found the one
now i hate what she has become
figured out i am on my own
I truly am all alone
it is now known to all
the writing is on the wall
standing here on the ledge
thinking of going over the edge
Twilight: thank you for posting this poem. Do you think you will post more? Maybe we could make this a catalogue thread for all your poems? If so, what would you like it to be called?
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Whole
You are in my heart i find
Forever wishing you were mine
Every day since you left
It is harder to catch my breath
I'm supposed to be a man
so why cant i drop the bottle from my hand
visions of what we had run through my head
i often dream and wish i were dead
everyday i am slowly breaking apart
everyday it is harder to pick up my heart
torn open to my very core
tring to find the stength to fet off the floor
only wish to hear two simple words
how is that so absurd
when i remember what i was told
my whole heart goes uterlly cold
this is wrong i know it in my soul
after this i may never be whole
Those are great poems. Looking forward to more
thank you
Completely Off-Topic , but I'm digging the Auron quote in your sig Twilight :thubsup:
Shawn, I love your poems as much as I love you!
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We are going to see if the automated system catches it.
What ????? Whad I do? :scared:
You lie with every word you say
Your own words will make you pay
I know the truth through and through
It's so clear now, i dont need you
All i used to feel was hate
Thats not right, this must be fate
Know that i will always carry you in my thoughts
Till the day my body and mind stop
Hoping my sorrow will forever end
That my rage gloom and happy will blend
Everything is now clear inside
Who knows what I will find
Now i go forward with ease
And thanks for the memories
We were never meant to be
This i can finally see
That is the reason you didn't stay
You have sucessfully pushed me away
Do you hear me thinking of things I dream about
I wonder if your leaving and quickly running out
Can you feel the beating of my heart when we talk
Knowing that i cant run before i learn to walk
There's no escaping what i feel
At times i wonder if all this is real
Tell me what I am to you am I big or small
You think you know me but you haven't seen it all
if you really walk away dont you think I'll feel sorrow
dreaming of when your coming back till then I'm hollow
Laying here sadly singing my sins for all to see
Cant you understand this is not the best I can be
Can you see me dreaming of you all night
If this is wrong i dont wanna be right
When it comes to me I think you have forgot
At times i think you love me not
thinking of you every night and day
you and i together feels like the right way
Being with you makes me totally fine
you have my complete heart body soul and mind
If you really walk away dont you think I'll feel sorrow
dreaming of when your coming back till then I'm hollow
Laying here sadly singing my sins for all to see
Cant you understand this is not the best I can be
Shawn, your feeling it again arent you? :D I miss ya hunny. Hope your well!
YO!
Pray for the Dead
Everything has become wrong
As I sit here writing this song
I think of all that I miss
While hoping I receive Death’s Kiss
Waves crash against my soul
My emotions have become cold
Pray and the Dead save you
Only cause they want to join you
They crave the warmth of all
Can you hear their screaming call
The dead reach out to take your turn
They know at the end of time everything burns
This reminds me of one of those poems that can spawn others if the author wishes.
Hurt
I paint my to face to hide from you
But when you look you see right through
My lies my heart my fears and dreams
Nothing here is what it seems
The shadows always scream to me
Always mocking all that I can see
Your memory shouts out my name
Telling me everything’s the same
I wish I could run and scream and hide
Fall into a dark black hole I wouldn’t mind
Don’t talk of love my voice screams out
I’ll rip from you your love and shout
My heart it burns and rips apart
Feeling has gone from my heart
In my dreams I see you cry
In my dreams I see you die
I know some of these may seem redundant but i wrote them all in a bad time in my life and they are a kind of therapy for me. Helps me cope and not go psycho.
Someone
Why did I fall for someone like you
All the things you said were untrue
I realise i could never trust after that
The worst part, I kept coming back
You take and take never give
Never understood how you can live
All you were was selfless and cold
Next time I will do what I am told
Why did I listen to someone like you
No more forget it I'm through
I hate you with everything I am
You destroyed everything i was are am
Whats done is done I am over it
Doesnt mean I forget now will i forgive it
Someone ripped me open in every way
I hope to return the favor someday
Thinking of you fills me with utter hate
This wasnt meant to be there's no fate
Poetry is a great outlet for catharsis.
I hope this hate leaves you soon...plenty of fish in the sea. No reason to STAY worked for too long over one.
Feel free to cut loose here. More catharsis. Keep all of such works as they can be pieced together for a unique work or modified. If nothing else, inspiration for future works. Also... be prepared to read in the future and it is ok to laugh at yourself...just don't get rid of it.
good advice. and if you cant laugh at yourself you cant laugh at anyone
Ummm....yes, you can. :lol:
Laughing at self is fun.
Laughing at Brice is mandatory!
<_<
:lol:
more to come
Well I am giving you my friends a treat. One of the first poems I ever wrote. Also one of the first I had published in the tenth grade so its short. I hope you like it
Love
Love is a feeling
Love is a chase
Love is believing
Love is a race
Love is a laugh
Love is a shiver
Love is a mountain
Love is a river
Love is forever
Love is growing
Love is eternal
Love is knowing.
Nice.