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razz
09-03-2009, 08:04 AM
Okay this was a difficult decision XD
Does this go in OT, Art Wall, the Forge, Odd's Lane? I have no fucking clue. Up to a mod to move it I guess.
But this is is a (yay, another -_-) project I started about two weeks ago, and was immediately interrupted by a program error resulting from a shitty patch, which was resolved a couple days ago ^_^

What this is, is a story, with visual aid from the "game" Gmod. I use character models to make the cast, and several maps for the setting. (to keep things simple, I kept most of the names as they are for each character). The writing will probably be in script format, usually.

here's how it works: I post a section of plot, then end it with a number of options (though sometimes I leave it completely open for player demands), then once a few people vote on a decision, I continue the plot based on their actions.

it should be noted that I do not claim any ownership of any models or characters present in this


The Cast:
http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Cast.jpg

The Resistance: Former citizens of the region whom have taken up arms again the tyrannic Federation.
Samus: Captain of the Battleship Pelican, she's one of the leaders of the resistance
Martin Pirez: Samus' personal assistant and body guard
Isaac Kleiner: a civilian scientist who volunteered to assist the rebels
the Sarge: a former federal soldier charged with protecting Kleiner
David Smith: (the player character) an engineers in the resistance, he is the copilot of the Pelican
Barney Wite: an old friend of the sarge, who helped start the resistance movement
Gary Tailor (not shown): A technician working aboard the Pelican
Daniel Yates (not shown): a scientist working for the resistance, he has designed a weapon that may turn the tide of the "war"

The federation: a Totalitarian state that has taken control of the region. They use questionable tactics, and are known for their brutality.

The Story:
This tale takes place in the distant future, in an unknown location, where a political party known as the Federation has taken control. A small resistance has grown as a result of the hostile situation, and rebellion scientists have been working on a weapon to help fight back with their smaller numbers.
before the weapon is complete, the resistance receives word that the Federation has discovered their base of operations, and they make haste to relocate...

rosie real
09-04-2009, 09:39 AM
and. . . .

:orely:

Jean
09-04-2009, 11:06 AM
razz: before I think of where to move it (TBack comes to mind first), can you clarify the copyright issue? I am in the dark about character models and whether or not they can or can't be used and the like.

razz
09-04-2009, 11:49 AM
aye, the thing about the mods and such, is that most models, maps, etc are made, and distributed freely, so it's okay to use them so long as profit isn't made.

razz
09-05-2009, 09:39 AM
right then, beginning:

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/1.jpg

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/3.jpg

Yates: We're heading out now, are we clear?
Conductor: Looks like we're clear for movement.
Yates: easy on the acceleration, we can't get this thing damaged!
Conductor: I know what I'm doing, no worries

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/2.jpg

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/4.jpg

Conductor: hold on, something's wrong...
Yates: what is it? Why are we...
Conductor: Shit! It's an ambush! How'd they find us so fast?!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/5.jpg


http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/6.jpg
*over radio*
This is Captain Samus of the Pelican, we've go you covered!
Yates: You already dropped off the doc?
Samus: Negative, he's still onboard!
Yates: Then why are you here?! Kleiner's more valuable than the weapon, get him out of here!
Samus: Too late, engaging the enemy!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/7.jpg

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/8.jpg

Gary: direct hit captain!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/9.jpg

Gary: and another!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/10.jpg

Pirez: we've got a tango to the right of the train

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/11.jpg

Gary: adjusting targeting

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/12.jpg

Yates: what the hell?
Cunductor: we've been hit!
Yates: which car?!
Conductor: number two
Yates: Shit! Something's wrong!
Conductor: what the he-

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/16.jpg

Barney: where'd they go?
Samus: I don't know, we gotta follow them!
Pirez: Are you fucking crazy?
Samus: you really need to ask that?!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/18-0.jpg

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/18-1.jpg

Gary: what the hell is this?
Pirez: Don't know, Hold on!!!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/19.jpg

Samus: Whoo! what a rush!
Barney: where the hell are we?! OH shit! Watch that ridge!

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/20.jpg

Samus: I see it!
Barney: OOOOF! Then why'd you just hit it?!
Samus: YOU WANT TO FLY THIS THING?

razz
09-05-2009, 09:42 AM
http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/22.jpg

Pirez?:...Hey, I think he's alive! Smith, Over here! You okay?
Smith: yeah, I'm fine, I think.

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/24.jpg

Samus: damn, you looked absolutely fucked up!
Smith: speak for yourself. how bad is it?
Samus: four casualties, engines are fried. I think we got lucky.
Pirez: You call this lucky? Where the fuck are we?
Samus: seems we're in some sort of crater or basin. Once Keleiner gets this engines fixed, we can get out of here.
Kleiner : Working on it!
Samus: David, why don't you see if you can help Kleiner?
Smith: sure thing captain.

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/25.jpg

Smith: hey Doc, anything I can do?
Kleiner: not much anybody can do. We don't have the parts to fix this.
Smith: what about the train?
Kleiner: I'm afraid we lost it. If we can find it, I should be able to salvage a few parts to fix this.
Sarge: We're not leaving this basin.
Smith: What about a small search team?

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/26.jpg

Sarge I can't spare the men!
Keleiner: then how about David here, and Barney? They can take the truck!
Sarge: I don't have the keys, I think Gary had them.
Smith: okay, where is he?
Sarge: he was one of the deceased, you'll have to search the bodies, they're kinda hard to identify.
Smith: ew. Alright.

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/27.jpg

*after several disgusting minutes of searching*

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/26.jpg

Smith: alright, I've got the keys!
Sarge: [sighs] alright, I've got Barney on watch

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/30.jpg

Barney: Hey, you're alive!
Smith: Yeah you can't kill me [I]that easy.
Barney: right...so what's the plan?
Smith: I got permission to form a two-man search party. You're man #2
Barney: Eh, it's better than watch duty, let's go.

*After a few minutes, they stop at the top of the crater*

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/32.jpg

Barney: damn, it don't look like we'll be returning without the Pelican... hmm, let's see. There's what looks like a bunch of steel containers, and a water tower.

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/31.jpg

Barney: Hey! what's that? Behind the ridge under the tower?

http://i798.photobucket.com/albums/yy270/RazzGmod/Opening/33.jpg

Smith: It looks like...A building! Gas station maybe? What do you think we should do?
Barney: I don't know. Head for the containers, or the gas station? Up to you?



*Choices*
check out the Gas Station
Investigate the containers

sarajean
09-06-2009, 06:47 PM
**moving this to turtleback lane**

mia/susannah
09-07-2009, 07:07 AM
Razz, this looks interesting!!!!

Woofer
09-07-2009, 07:08 AM
I am intrigued, but I haven't had a chance to read it and have fun. I've been working all weekend. Joy.

mia/susannah
09-07-2009, 07:22 AM
I would say head for the containers!!!

rosie real
09-07-2009, 10:45 AM
i vote gas station

razz
09-12-2009, 06:53 AM
Alright, since this is moving slow, We'll go with whatever the next voter chooses, 2/3.

Woofer
09-12-2009, 04:23 PM
Gas station, but proceed cautiously.

razz
10-04-2009, 12:37 PM
Gas Station it is, Expect it in 2-4 days :D

Lily-sai
10-04-2009, 12:47 PM
wow, how i didn't notice this until now?? absolutely brilliant, razz! :wub:

i would've headed to the gas station, too.