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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:02 AM
i want to thank everyone who read these poems. but they are no longer going to be here. since i can't delete a thread, and since they are mine, i just deleted them individually. i truly appreciate you taking the time to read them and hope that they brought some measure of, if not joy, then contemplation to your world.
The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:03 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:04 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:05 AM
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I like your style. Bold! "Gravity" stands on it's own, "untitled" is bold enough to ask the question of dualism.
I can't comment on the rest of it, because I don't understand shit about non-formal poetry; but that Silver Moonlight haiku is a real killer. It has never left my mind since I first saw it.
I find non-formal poetry a challenge and admire those who do it well. (I'm not much of a haiku fan though.)
The Lady of Shadows
08-12-2008, 10:01 PM
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The Lady of Shadows
09-30-2008, 03:41 PM
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I rather like that Ma'am!
The Lady of Shadows
09-30-2008, 10:31 PM
thanks jon. deception has been much on my mind of late.
thanks jon. deception has been much on my mind of late.
Grrr... yeah... tough for me to not call some out given their history.
The Lady of Shadows
12-09-2008, 11:02 PM
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The Lady of Shadows
12-09-2008, 11:19 PM
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Some very good work here ts. Very good, especially the haiku. They have some powerful emotion in them.
The Lady of Shadows
12-11-2008, 01:08 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
02-17-2009, 12:23 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
02-17-2009, 12:26 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
04-24-2009, 02:40 PM
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I reckon I lost track of this thread. Good works...keep writing.
The Lady of Shadows
04-28-2009, 09:58 AM
:blush:
say thankya
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