Toil In Turn. {flash fiction}

[rradicob]

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[rradicob]

I forgot tabs don't work on here. Oh well.
Another "flash fiction" by me that I'm posting on here until I can finish one my of my other stories, and share it.

I'm happy to hear what you think about this story as well as the way in which it is written. The rhyming thing is just something that started by accident and I continued with it. The only thing I'm not entirely happy with is he first two lines, which I had to go back and rewrite after finishing the story because the rhyming didn't match.

I know the copyright isn't neccesary, but I only do it to protect myself and my writing.

Thanks in advance for any replies.
-Richard N.