Poetry Contest #1 - TIEBREAKER!

[Odetta]

OK, we have a 4-way tie going... please help determine the best of the 4!

Here was the picture...




1. BROWNING'S CHILDE...

Flashfried

Welling up within me,
Unseen vibrations coalesce.
Friction produces vibrant waves of electric blue,
Alive with hair raising potential.
Inaudible, Intangible humming,
Searching for an outlet.
Energy brimming over,
Barely contained.
Finally,
An unsuspecting victem,
I drag my feet as I approach.
My hand extends an innocent greeting.

SNAP.....the discharge is serene.


2. razz...

Eternity,
Growing, shifting
floral Rebirth
crucified
it wears a mask


3. Lady of Shadows...

blue

blue dances down me
nerves taut with pleasure colors
electrifying


4. SpaceMaN...

Soul, searching
Entrance, subdued
Inside, compounding
Exasperation, orgasmic
Escape, exotic

This poll will last 1 week.

[Melike]

SpaceMaN, though it was hard to decide between razz's SpaceMaN's...

[mia/susannah]

had to go with brownings child although they are all good

[Jon]

Yikes! did I do something to get disqualified?

Oh well. I cast a vote here anyway.

[BROWNINGS CHILDE]

I thought Jon already had this one in the bag.....

[alinda]

Brownings Childe gets my vote this round. Tho' all of the poems have merrit, I just like his
static electricity thing

[Jean]

Yikes! did I do something to get disqualified?

Oh well. I cast a vote here anyway.

I thought Jon already had this one in the bag.....

Absolutely. Just look here. This tiebreaker is, as far as I can see, for the third place.

[AlishaRiley]

I think I'm guna have to go with Razz, actually.

[Odetta]

Yikes! did I do something to get disqualified?

Oh well. I cast a vote here anyway.

I thought Jon already had this one in the bag.....

Absolutely. Just look here. This tiebreaker is, as far as I can see, for the third place.

Bears are always right!

[Jon]

Thank you. I wasn't upset...just confused by the phrase "Who should win?"

GO B.C.!!!!!

(B.C., Ya' want I should find some dirt on your competetors? I know some people. I'll get right on it.)

[BROWNINGS CHILDE]

I already know Razz cheats at Looney Tunes Majhong. haha

[Jon]

I already know Razz cheats at Looney Tunes Majhong. haha

Spit take award of the week!!

[Jon]

Ok. Here's the skinny. I just got a call from my "source," Vinny the pancreas.

Lady of Shadows is NOT dark and mysterious. In fact, she is Photophobic!

Spaceman is a N.A.S.A. reject. He was kicked out for, and I quote, "A fetish for placing the space shuttle's heat resistant tiles down the front of his pants after heating or cooling them to various tempratures." (BTW, we must go out for a beer Aaron!)

Razz does more than cheat at Looney Tunes Majhong, it seems he's fucking Goofy...I mean, he's fucking Goofy. (I could not find an older joke.)

Why would you vote for such disingenuous peoples? Browning's Childe works 197 hours per week at a shelter for homeless nuns and unemployed children. He thinks "green" as well. Browning's Childe walks 83 miles to work at the shelter (uphill, both ways) to reduce his carbon footprint. Along the way to and fro work, he often stops to feed and play with quadriplegic catfish.

Vote B.C. (before Christ)

[BROWNINGS CHILDE]

I actually only work 168 hours/week, but I do spend the other 29 hours in a parallel universe teaching job skills to underpriveleged chipmunks. In fact Alvin, Simon and Theodore owe everything to me.

But I'm not proud.

[Jon]

Lets see...24 hours in a day...7 days in a week... you have created additional time for humans as well! What more do you people want??!!!

What a man

What a guy.

What a fabulous private pilot!