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    Soldier Boy Odetta is a jewel in the rough Odetta is a jewel in the rough Odetta is a jewel in the rough Odetta is a jewel in the rough Odetta's Avatar

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    Default Finally! We have a winner!

    Our first place of the poetry contest goes to...

    BROWNINGS CHILDE!


    2nd place is flaggwalkstheline
    3rd place goes to Letti



    CONGRATULATIONS!

    Prizes are forthcoming once I remember what the prizes were supposed to be!


    Here are the winning poems!


    1. BROWNINGS CHILDE...


    All Hallow's Eve

    The westering sun soaks the earth,
    With tints of burning crimson.
    Sinister shadows creep behind,
    Or crawl along ahead.

    All Hallows Eve's crepuscular rays,
    Bring gloaming death in season.
    The darkness bests the sun's assault,
    And fills the soul with dread.

    The children laugh from door to door,
    As demons watch and wait.
    Ensconsed within each gloom and shade,
    They'll stay untill they've fed.

    As monster's scream from plastic masks,
    With threats of "Trick or Treat",
    The real ghouls lurk with growing need,
    To rent, and tear, and shred.

    A groaning wind whines through the trees,
    It whispers and it sighes.
    Jack-O-Lanterns search the night,
    With eyes of gleaming red.

    As ghosts and witches roam the streets,
    A straggler falls behind.
    The ambush happens silently,
    And in the dark he's bled.

    Though most will make it home of course,
    With candy in their bags.
    At least in one child's room tonight,
    There'll be an empty bed.




    2.flaggwalkstheline...


    A time for waiting

    Autumn is the only time of year
    For us
    The lonely people in black coats who wait on street corners with our hands in our pockets
    Digging deep into emptyness
    For the rest of the spinning sun cycle
    The land is green and joyous or celebrating eventual growth
    We scuttle like asthmatic rats in the sunlight
    But when summer’s citric tidal passion finally ebbs into waves of dull gold and cracked brown
    Autumn waits like an expectant lover in a darkened motel room
    One lightbulb hanging powerless
    The leaves hack chlorophyll tuberculosi as they drop no-eyed from the trees
    Coughing under my boots
    I wait for further equinox instructions
    The wind smiles but it’s the smile of bitter victory and bruised apples
    I wait
    Through leafless lilac bushes and the peeling of white paint
    Through burned out bulbs and nights growing long like dark hair
    I tap the smudged windows with my dirty fingernails and wait
    I wait for a spear of sunlight to pierce the veil of ice
    But at least during autumn when the leaves speak to me
    And the sky holds it's grey breath until it turns briefly blue
    Like a child about to dive into a swimming pool in those bright but lost hours of summer
    I do not wait alone




    3. Letti...

    Fall

    I am a leaf
    And my whole world is falling down
    Can't recognise my friends
    Their new clothes are yellow, red and brown

    When wind gets stronger
    Some of them make up their mind
    Take a big jump
    And like butterflies they start to fly

    Sometimes I feel
    their passionate dance will never end
    Time is their slave
    None of them ever needs to land

    But sooner or later
    They all fall and kiss the cold ground
    If I look down
    I see never-ending colorful crowd

    I am not ready yet
    But the wind is sighing my name
    I am just a leaf
    And I am part of this beautiful play




    Thank you to everyone who participated... this has been our best poetry contest ever!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    ongratulations you guys are poets.

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    Congrats guys!

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    Congratulations you guys, I only got to read these three, but they are all spectacular!
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    congratulations!!!


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    Congrats guys!!



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    Brilliant work all

    Well done

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    Congratulations, BC, flagg and Letti.
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    Well done, all of you!

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    Am I really in!?!?

    Wow, thank you so so much.

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    Now's winter time so I suggest you all write a poem about winter!
    I'm really bad at poetry so I'll support you all from the side

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    Weedeater BROWNINGS CHILDE is a jewel in the rough BROWNINGS CHILDE is a jewel in the rough BROWNINGS CHILDE is a jewel in the rough BROWNINGS CHILDE is a jewel in the rough BROWNINGS CHILDE's Avatar

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    Thanks all, I really enjoyed alot of these poems.

    New contest?
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    Congratulations all!

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    Congrats to BC, it was a wonderful peice of work

    congrats to all else who entered, your all winners in my eyes (cheesey but true)

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    Quote Originally Posted by BROWNINGS CHILDE View Post
    Thanks all, I really enjoyed alot of these poems.

    New contest?
    yes, there will be a new one in a week or so
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Odetta View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by BROWNINGS CHILDE View Post
    Thanks all, I really enjoyed alot of these poems.

    New contest?
    yes, there will be a new one in a week or so
    I will be ready
    if the worlds gonna end then let's get it over with, i got shit to do

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    good
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Great job to all and congrats to the top 3.
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    all lovely poems. congrats!!!



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