Hi,
Long time SK reader, just recently found these pages, I have a few of these that I like to loosely refer to as 'poems' kicking around and it would be great to have some feedback on them... (good or bad - I'm a grown up, I can take it ;D)
So, here you go...
little things
when i first
met her
she
had this saying
almost a
catchphrase
and it
bugged me
i used to keep
onandonandon at
her
to stop
and one day
she did
now
i wish
i hadn't tried
so hard.