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    Default Poems from our Contests!

    Included below will be a collection of all of the poems (alphabetically by authors) entered for our assorted Poetry Contests. Winners (1st, 2nd, and 3rd places) of the contests will have a rose placed in their titles. Please enjoy!

    Contest # 1



    Armand St. Pierre

    Practically painless pineal practitioner
    Is not gone It hasn't melted
    But secretly infiltrated in the most
    Publicly proclaimed pivotal palace

    Anecdotally analyzed anonymously accentuated
    Is bearing upon our senses like
    But bearing no resemblance to
    Acquired ascension artificially acquiesced

    Throw it out All THE RuLeSSS
    Adorn yourself with what
    Love you poses
    And Rise to meet the shadow
    That is also arising

    From within you
    And without you

    BROWNING'S CHILDE

    Flashfried

    Welling up within me,
    Unseen vibrations coalesce.
    Friction produces vibrant waves of electric blue,
    Alive with hair raising potential.
    Inaudible, Intangible humming,
    Searching for an outlet.
    Energy brimming over,
    Barely contained.
    Finally,
    An unsuspecting victem,
    I drag my feet as I approach.
    My hand extends an innocent greeting.

    SNAP.....the discharge is serene.

    Chooch

    Of Blood.....

    Of Blood, first of honor
    of heart pumped full with
    the strength of life...
    unknown of threats or danger
    Of God and country, no regrets
    no blame.
    It will be done...

    flaggwalkstheline

    Closeup of an eyeball

    Electric water taking in all the information it can consume
    Greedy blue muscle swaying like a tide
    Floating through a salty ocean
    Ominous black dot silent and yawning
    Pulsing every so often inside the circle
    Staring close and curiously
    At itself in a mirror

    Jon

    Mass Dementia

    Roaring in fury toward one another.
    The human waves seek only war and pain.
    Like in the end of days, brother against brother
    Each glare at the other with choler and distain.
    The human waves about to collide.
    Like mass dementia, mass genocide.
    It splashes and sprays, becomes many more than two.
    E pluribus unum

    Lady_of_Shadows

    blue

    blue dances down me
    nerves taut with pleasure colors
    electrifying

    Letti

    Colours

    Black and white
    gray and blue
    these colours make me
    remember you

    The black of your hair
    is like the midnight sky
    stars fall on it
    and they never cry

    The white of face
    is the home of my hands
    It's like a snowy field
    or snowdrop lands

    The gray of your smile
    shows fears you try to hide
    Your body is trembling
    when you try to lie

    The blue of your eyes
    is my infinite well
    How could I help?
    Why don't you tell?

    Black and white
    gray and blue
    help me to help her
    help me to be true


    razz

    Eternity,
    Growing, shifting
    floral Rebirth
    crucified
    it wears a mask

    SpaceMaN

    Soul, searching
    Entrance, subdued
    Inside, compounding
    Exasperation, orgasmic
    Escape, exotic
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Oh nice, all of the past poems will be in one place then...genious!

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    Contest # 2


    Aaron

    Celebration of the Majestic Murdering Circus

    Dance beneath the wheel again,
    the lights are burning bright;
    Come celebrate with us on this,
    our night of death’s delight.

    The sweaty hooples shuffled in
    like cattle to the slaughter,
    confused, yet laughing, to the song
    of pleading sons and daughters.

    The souls of these unwitting dupes
    snuffed out to please the soulless.
    Come one, come all—admission’s free—
    At the Majestic Murderering Circus!

    And look! There’s Sam the Shotgun Man
    at cartwheels with the witchers,
    his top hat smeared with a preacher’s bile,
    while blood-soaked monsters smile for pictures.

    The Lincoln Twins are juggling
    two arms, one foot, three heads!
    Come quick and play amongst the meat,
    else grind the bones for Sunday’s bread.

    The moon drops low as dawn draws near.
    They’re on their way before first light.
    For Hayward waits to see those tents;
    another night of death’s delight.

    alinda

    The night was full of promise
    Yet alone here I do stand.
    What makes us think that
    life is good, a joy ride by the sand?

    My heart is ever hopeful that they are
    having fun.Still I stand and watch them,
    I'm not the only one.

    There's many a wounded warrior
    that wishes they were here
    and still I stand alone in fear.
    The water mocks my reflective mood.

    BROWNING'S CHILDE

    Solitude

    Away from all the others,
    I can scarcely hear them scream.
    I watch them from a distance.
    Surreal as if a dream.
    Popcorn and corndogs,
    I taste in wisps of air.
    Flashing lights and ringing bells,
    The world without a care.
    A fleeting thought of joining,
    But no, I do not dare.
    Cause I am always over here,
    And they are over there.

    Chooch

    Bright white light...
    In the dark of night...
    I've seen you there...
    on the ferris wheel...
    with rainbow's of color in your hair....
    Do you know I'm here....
    wishing to be there....

    CPU

    Final Illumination

    I shine, blazing atop my column
    My lone light illuminates my friend bridge who appears so stone, silent, and solemn

    Across the pool at the end of my quiet partners span
    I see my family dancing, beckoning to visitors come to that isle of man

    I watch my cousin Red, Aunt Blue, and Uncle Yellow weave their dance of color
    The visitors mill about, mouths agape, excitedly staring in wonder

    I am not sad that I do not dance, sitting motionless atop my tower
    I am confident, and quite happy, here with my friend at this late hour

    I know soon, when my kin end their revelry and finally go dark, the visitors will trudge again home
    I will once again be the last light to have shone.

    flaggwalkstheline

    Coney Island shines in the night
    Neon heaven glowing across the bay
    The Circus's reflection marches across the water

    The midway shines, gaudy and loud, across the bay
    He stalks the boardwalk slowly back and forth from railing to railing
    Watching the lights spinning and the giddy sound of children screaming
    Tinny brass music floats across the water pretending to be stately and unaware of the overflated sillyness of it's tooting
    A piece of cotton candy lies trampled on the rotting planks
    All the sweetness gone out of it and dripping away
    No ferryman will be coming to take him there, no orbitting charon after midnight
    Yet still he waits for a boat to carry him across the pitch black lake
    To an neon deep fried paradise which smells of puke and sugar
    He waits
    Even if it takes till the morning

    Frunobulax

    Pores
    Rotundas filled with phosphorescence showed the pores.
    And as they turned anticlockwise we saw the sores form on the throats.
    Cool wind rush, cool wind rush, entering lungs.
    Scattered into thousands of shards, a bell is rung.
    And as they reformed in solitude we saw the throats covered in feathers.
    Slender necks protected from the cold weather,
    Inclemency oncoming inclemency here.
    Turning left to avoid the oncoming fear.
    And the rotating lights changed colour.
    RED GREEN BLUE YELLOW RED GREEN BLUE YELLOW
    We looked at each other.
    RED GREEN BLUE YELLOW RED GREEN BLUE YELLOW
    Is this hit real?
    RED GREEN BLUE YELLOW
    Is this shit real?
    RED GREEN BLUE
    Just let me feel.
    YELLOW
    And I see what happened.
    RED GREEN
    All the rotundas and sores,
    All the illuminated pores,
    BLUE YELLOW
    Were an illusion from panic.
    RED GREEN BLUE
    Sedated now with calm and your warmth, we ride the circus wheel.
    YELLOW RED
    Embraces. Wrap in white.
    GREEN BLUE
    Amaranthine haze show my face.
    RED GREEN
    Stay.

    Jean

    Ways to Be Remembered

    To throw a big party, inviting all friends
    all family, close or remote,
    and swallow some poison, and happily end
    one’s life, leaving a note,

    which would be remembered forever by those
    who shared that memorable night.
    Alas, he clearly, distinctly knows
    he has no-one to invite.

    To come to a school with a machine-gun,
    or to subway with handmade bombs;
    to see all them people fall down or run,
    and pretend it’s a part of Islam’s

    war on those with westernized mind,
    against the crusaders’ grandsons. -
    But he can’t use weapons of any kind,
    he has no access to guns.

    What’s left to him, then? What is his last chance?
    To patiently stand in the line,
    then, on top of the wheel, to cast one last glance;
    for a moment, to feel divine

    freedom of flight, as he will jump down
    from that Wheel that glows in the dark,
    to make – forever - the whole damn town
    say, “It’s Mr.Smith’s gravemark”!

    Jon

    By Three


    They walk and enjoy the fair, and the fairer sex

    a casual stroll by three.

    Father, son and son’s dear friend, to celebrate a country young and brave

    As they pass, a Hoosier ignites a light, the product they know as the Strobe light®

    Many a migraine sufferer know the furry of this beast.

    A flash brighter than the sun over and over again.

    The migraine sufferer turns away too late, but an idea grows with his pain.

    Before the Hoosier lights again and sparks flashes of Hell

    The three huddle and plan. The Hoosier must pay.

    What would happen to an epileptic sufferer would do with no recourse

    from this unending assault on one’s God given light sensors.

    A hiss and the searing flash over and over for hours it seems but only minutes pass.

    The father now knows how to teach this Hoosier ass!

    The flashing fades, a quick glance and the father sees more of the hated product.

    Three close in, very close now.

    Shouting distance, 10 yards, 5 yards, mere feet

    Arm’s length.

    The Hoosier ass thinks he has an audience.

    A hiss, a flash, the show begins

    Father drops, writhes, jerks in feigned convulsions. Saliva gleams in each strobe.

    “Help !” “HELP” cry the pseudo worried teens. My dad is epileptic!

    The Hoosier ass now only thinks of lawsuits and such.

    He knows little of medicine, but this pathology and light he knows.

    “What can I do?” he cries, seeing himself in a three piece suit, in court.

    There goes the pick-up, RV and plasma TV,

    his mind displays for him.

    The large teen cries “Give me your wallet so he doesn’t bite his tongue.”

    The other teen confirms. “Damage control” thinks the Hoosier ass.

    His wallet surrendered. The large teen places it into his father’s clamping teeth.

    Quickly the father rises to his feet, migraine and all

    The wallet is spit out of the father's mouth

    and into the father’s hand.

    Catcalls and laughter accompany

    a casual run by three.








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    Thanks O for putting these all together. We have a talented group of people here.



    Lalalalaaaa, lalalalaaa
    Lalalalaaaa, lalalalaaa



    sugarpop <3

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    We certainly do!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Looking mighty good Odetta!!

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    Interesting. GREAT idea Ms.O!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    It was Jean's, actually...
    can't take credit for bear's ideas
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Beary good jean!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Odetta View Post
    It was Jean's, actually...
    !t was Keystone Bears'n'Roses'!

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    All ideas start and end with the bear
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jean View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Odetta View Post
    It was Jean's, actually...
    !t was Keystone Bears'n'Roses'!

    Bears and Roses...wasn't that a 90's band?
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    No, it's an eternal moderation team.

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    I love that!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    1. Armand St. Pierre...

    Dorthy's Spell

    This depth
    which performs for me
    during moments of arcane obliviousness
    and calls to some who dream
    Is not mine but serves as my home

    Their rainbow
    showcasing from red to violet
    stars who give little hint
    to those who dream
    of something beyond

    That Possibility
    seemingly limited by probability
    plays nervously for the observant to hear
    for the sighted to see
    It's Unification


    2. Jon...

    ...And The Hits Keep on Coming!

    Harriet Tubman, John Brown

    Two humans, now of great renown.

    Metacom, Pontiac, Tecumseh, and Cuauhtemoc and Sitting Bull

    Saw a battle for their peoples’ soul

    Martin Luther King Jr, John F. Kennedy and Abraham Lincoln

    Stories of demise to America’s chagrin.

    Nelson Mandela and Anne Frank

    Torture, with bigotry to thank.

    All victims, in a round about way, of the almighty Dollar.

    But, truth will reveal them martyrs for the sake of COLOR!


    3. BROWNING'S CHILDE...

    Bend of Oblivion

    Venomous orb
    Murderous, pulsating eye
    Oily, dark bile within

    Maerlyn's black thirteen
    Odious, gaping abyss
    Down the rabbits hole

    We go.......

    War and pestilence
    Plague of human existence
    Rotting, putrid souls

    Revolting secrets
    Unspeakable sins are told
    Deadly lies unfold

    Mothers drown their own
    Sinister, murky waters
    Depth of which, unknown

    Hateful dream of death
    Walk with Walter O' the Dim
    Come and stay awhile

    Sanity undone
    Unraveling and threadbare
    Laughing and screaming

    Forever


    4. CPU...

    Calling Out Loudly On Rooftops

    Look down to the neon street
    tubes glow with anger there
    others flicker come-hither come-ons like, Girls! Girls! Girls!
    in their electron-excited glowing lust

    Blazing auto eyes cut through the darkness
    The traffic lamps choreograph the dance
    ...it's cool, pass on through
    ...little warmer now best slow it down
    ....HOT! you best come to a stop

    At night the sin shines
    the barely clothed girls stand beneath the bulbs
    the hot illumination bathes them in constant blush
    by morning they'll regain a virginal glow

    A monochromatic priest wastes his time handing out tracts
    his stark contrast disrupts the flow
    he is an eddy in the current of the brightly and dangerously clad

    Look down until the dark runs away
    and the sin no longer shines
    the tubes calm
    the lust dissapates


    5.flaggwalkstheline...

    The White Crayon

    Here I go again
    Falsely inspired by this and that
    I'll be a botox prophet yet
    Writing of things wrtten of a thousand times before
    News of more impending death
    Comes more and more frequently as I get older
    I'm learning this now at the over-ripe veritable rotten vegatable age of 19

    An exponentially increasin math equation
    Growing into too many numbers to comprehend as anything but statistics
    Reaching for that fabled event horizon across the sky and at the edge of space
    Everybody's an astronaut in some way

    Me?
    Oh well me head's fulla helium floating high above my shoulders
    The great mystery is I don't know who's holding the string

    And as I grab the instrument with which I would like to demolish minds
    Scribbling like a man doused in gasoline who knows he'll be burnt soon
    I realize I grabbed the white crayon
    And thus said

    Nothing


    6. LadyHitchhiker...

    Coloring Ghosts

    Soft and sweet
    were the days
    when I was allowed to be an innocent.
    Sitting at the dining table,
    crayons in fists
    as I swung my feet
    from a chair that I would say -
    in fact insist -
    was too tall for me.
    I liked to color
    in between the lines on notebook paper.
    Over and over and over again.
    I said that they were ghosts.
    The crayons were too soon locked away.
    Saved for other days.
    Then as time passed
    and I became a mother
    my own mother allowed me
    to use those same crayons - they passed
    from her hands to mine - with my daughter.
    Her favorite first was purple then blue, yellow, and pink.
    I see those colors in the sunrises, and think
    of her
    and all the time we’ve been forbidden.
    Now the crayons are locked away
    at another place.
    No one colors with them anymore.
    I consider sending them to a better place
    another place
    to children that may need them.
    But who will actually appreciate our old crayons
    and what they had meant to my mom
    and me as a mom
    and ultimately just to me?
    Now they are locked away.
    I guess that knowledge only hurts me.
    Something I never knew I would get to share
    and now I have no one else to share
    this with; how soft and sweet
    and fleeting
    life can be.
    Just like those moments
    coloring ghosts
    at the dining table
    frantically coloring ghosts
    perhaps to color away my bad dreams


    7. Aaron...

    Stella's Breasts

    Wondrous things were Stella's breasts to me,
    Great swelling enigmas, coffee-
    colored and swinging
    In nakedness.

    They were full enough to nurse me
    When Mother fell ill--
    still full from Bobo,
    The baby that they buried
    on a Thursday morning.

    I remember him sometimes, just barely;
    Like recalling a story
    told long ago.
    Cold dead newborn eyes;
    irises so black.

    He stared into forever
    From his pretty white crib,
    and the baby blue
    walls
    Reflected in his eyes.

    Stella cried while she fed me,
    Stroking my head with her nipple
    in my mouth.
    "Six days," she would whisper,
    "Six goddamn days..."

    Babies should probably live longer,
    their bones would surely be stronger.
    But 'tis good that his days were not seven,
    for the milk is far sweeter in heaven.


    8. Gaberax...

    White
    Or gray
    A thread-bare, sun-bleached flag
    Flips lazily in a painfully blue sky
    And I close my eyes
    But the voracious sun
    Soaks through my eyelids
    And through my blood’s
    Meager protection
    To create roiling amber clouds
    That only I can see
    Till my arm comes up
    To block the insatiable sun
    And I plunge into deeper grays
    Where colorless images arise
    Unbidden
    And your face
    With all of its expressions
    Of love and happiness, anger and pain
    Forms and floats
    Inside my internal visions
    And as I listen to the quiet sonic booms
    Of the restless flag
    And register the sun’s burning kiss
    On the crows-feet around my sealed eyes
    I am frozen by the now of the moment
    Till consciousness
    Evaporates.
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    Letti...


    Fall

    I am a leaf
    And my whole world is falling down
    Can't recognise my friends
    Their new clothes are yellow, red and brown

    When wind gets stronger
    Some of them make up their mind
    Take a big jump
    And like butterflies they start to fly

    Sometimes I feel
    their passionate dance will never end
    Time is their slave
    None of them ever needs to land

    But sooner or later
    They all fall and kiss the cold ground
    If I look down
    I see never-ending colorful crowd

    I am not ready yet
    But the wind is sighing my name
    I am just a leaf
    And I am part of this beautiful play


    flaggwalkstheline...


    A time for waiting

    Autumn is the only time of year
    For us
    The lonely people in black coats who wait on street corners with our hands in our pockets
    Digging deep into emptyness
    For the rest of the spinning sun cycle
    The land is green and joyous or celebrating eventual growth
    We scuttle like asthmatic rats in the sunlight
    But when summer’s citric tidal passion finally ebbs into waves of dull gold and cracked brown
    Autumn waits like an expectant lover in a darkened motel room
    One lightbulb hanging powerless
    The leaves hack chlorophyll tuberculosi as they drop no-eyed from the trees
    Coughing under my boots
    I wait for further equinox instructions
    The wind smiles but it’s the smile of bitter victory and bruised apples
    I wait
    Through leafless lilac bushes and the peeling of white paint
    Through burned out bulbs and nights growing long like dark hair
    I tap the smudged windows with my dirty fingernails and wait
    I wait for a spear of sunlight to pierce the veil of ice
    But at least during autumn when the leaves speak to me
    And the sky holds it's grey breath until it turns briefly blue
    Like a child about to dive into a swimming pool in those bright but lost hours of summer
    I do not wait alone



    Frunobulax...


    Reddening
    Crushed beneath my hands,
    Worn into the dirt,
    Leaves evaporate into sand.
    Stems and veins burst.

    In this season of changing colours
    Feel the gentle bite of cold.
    Each green turning duller
    Reddening to look old.

    Now we enter the season of fall.
    Look into the sun.
    Still hear summer's long drawl?
    Look into the sun.


    ladysai...

    brilliant dying shades
    echoing joys of time passed
    the wheel turns again


    Cozener...


    End of Autumn

    We stood facing each other in the chill orange gold
    Each of us wanting to speak but finding no words
    We just stood, our thoughts stymied by pain and pride
    Never so loud seemed the breeze and chirping of birds

    “I’m sorry” burned in the front of my mind
    But I could not force it up from my throat.
    I could see the need for it in her eyes
    But between us had formed a fathomless moat.

    As she turned away my heart reached out
    But she said not a word, no farewell bidden
    I watched my friend walk off into autumn
    And I knew I would never see her again.


    Nerak...


    Falling
    Spinning
    Swirling
    Turning

    The leaves of fall are dying

    Sighing
    Crying
    Settling

    The leaves of fall land

    Stomping
    Crunching

    The leaves of fall trampled

    Empty

    The trees of fall all alone


    Lady Hitchhiker



    Almost a Dream

    In a clearing
    almost a dream
    I stand
    barefoot
    waiting for absolution
    waiting for resolution
    waiting for the future

    while the world dies
    and spins
    and falls
    and changes
    color dwindling
    color growing
    my decision grows clear

    air crisp
    toes crinkling through the desolation
    wondering why death is so pretty
    and rebirth so uniform
    waiting for the reincarnation
    waiting for the revolution
    of season
    I still stay here.


    Jon...


    The beauty of leprosy




    The search for food and I struggle again

    Oh how you all marvel at the beauty of my pain

    I slowly starve and you gawk at the colors of my decay

    I shade you for the hot season and then I am merely a display

    My body changes colors as my energy is sapped

    I hold little reserve to be tapped

    I withdraw into myself as body parts turn brown

    Then, in a few days you must harvest them from the ground.

    Your back aches from cleaning up after my leprosy

    Let’s make a deal among all of you and all of we.

    You ask that yellow disk to always stay in the sky

    And we will spare you the mess each year as our hunters die



    alinda...


    When I was a young girl
    as summer faded slow,
    We kids would rake the yard
    the parents pride you know.

    For hours it seemed we'd gather
    the remnants of its glory
    Father would take some and
    set them afire, the smell of it
    still in my memory...

    It was always permitted tho'
    before that last leaf fell
    to make that one last pile.
    Then we would laugh and leap
    into the late days dream.

    I remember, and still smile.


    educatedlady...


    The Change
    The trees grow bare
    Skies a gloomy grey
    Reds, golds and browns
    Mix together in death and beauty.
    Soon the snow will begin and
    I will say farewell to autumn.



    Jean...


    Autumn Chant

    Bright are the colors of doom and defeat,
    Funeral wreaths please the eye of the dead,
    Red-cloaked drummers will beat a retreat,
    Hope me no hopes, for the future is read.

    Show me no rubies, no gold of the loot:
    Bright are the colors of doom and defeat,
    Frail was the armor you crush underfoot,
    Red-cloaked drummers will beat a retreat.

    Colors of gore come to lighten the grief:
    Funeral wreaths please the eye of the dead.
    Scarlet the plague that will ravage your fief.
    Hope me no hopes, for the future is read.



    Thaine Rogers...


    One fine day
    The air tastes crisp
    Cold
    Stark
    Against my tongue.
    Every inhalation
    breath
    moment
    is another taste of autumn.
    Golden yellow leaves fall
    topple
    drift
    And settle soundlessly on the pavement.
    Where they sit
    Snap
    Mumble
    Underneath the boots and shoes of a thousand hurrying souls.
    One fine day.
    One fine day


    BROWNINGS CHILDE...


    All Hallow's Eve

    The westering sun soaks the earth,
    With tints of burning crimson.
    Sinister shadows creep behind,
    Or crawl along ahead.

    All Hallows Eve's crepuscular rays,
    Bring gloaming death in season.
    The darkness bests the sun's assault,
    And fills the soul with dread.

    The children laugh from door to door,
    As demons watch and wait.
    Ensconsed within each gloom and shade,
    They'll stay untill they've fed.

    As monster's scream from plastic masks,
    With threats of "Trick or Treat",
    The real ghouls lurk with growing need,
    To rent, and tear, and shred.

    A groaning wind whines through the trees,
    It whispers and it sighes.
    Jack-O-Lanterns search the night,
    With eyes of gleaming red.

    As ghosts and witches roam the streets,
    A straggler falls behind.
    The ambush happens silently,
    And in the dark he's bled.

    Though most will make it home of course,
    With candy in their bags.
    At least in one child's room tonight,
    There'll be an empty bed.



    Gaberax...


    Autumnal Sacrament

    The old oak tree outside my front door laughs.
    Shaking its great shaggy mane of yellows and browns and reds.
    Shedding its frabjous green summer coat, now worn in patches, of ochre and umber and carmine.
    Stretching, yawning and twisting its mighty limbs in the cooling evening breezes.
    Basking in the pale fading sunlight.
    Anticipating another winter’s hibernation.
    Tucked away inside itself; silent and still.
    Sleepily admiring the work it has prepared for me.
    Spring’s leaves of promise; contorted and desiccated
    A mottled arabesque littering the earth below
    Waiting for my final rituals of plastic rake and garbage bags and aching muscles
    And pagan fires
    Lit beneath its gnarled branches.
    Humble votives
    Ambrosia to imaginary Gods
    A silent prayer for us both
    For safe passage through the coming darkness
    To the promise of the light
    Beyond.
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    candy...

    You’re my hero my saviour, my medieval knight
    You reached out and saved me on that autumn night
    You held me and rocked me and told me you cared
    As I sobbed in your arms, I no longer felt scared

    She’d attacked me and chased me out of my home
    Out into the night and the thundering storm
    Fate brought you to me when I need you most
    When I saw you at first you seemed like a ghost

    And now all these years later as i sit in the sun
    I think back to childhood that should have been fun,
    I think of the hurt and the tears start to flow
    I sit in the sunshine in the afternoon glow

    My heart it is breaking because I miss you so much
    Your picture in my head I hold and I clutch
    Icicles pierce my heart and my head as I think of you
    My hero, my saviour my friend that stood true


    Fruno...

    For SC, S, LA

    Elysian fields! O rain down on me with your all enveloping sunshine!
    The gentle kiss of your rays soothe.
    The gentle caress of your beams are manna.
    Brush aside the gray autumn lies.
    Weather is but a state of mind.
    Settle for frost in winter
    As the iron maiden of icicles close in on you.
    Why?
    Why? You can be sitting in the high sunlight!
    Settle for heat in summer
    As the humidity drowns you.
    Why?
    Why? You can be sitting in the cool shade!
    Settle for thunderstorms in fall
    As the danger shrinks you.
    Why?
    Why? You can be living happily in the soundstorm!
    Elysian fields!! O shine down on me with your encompassing beauty!!
    The gentle touch of your heat calms my heart.
    The gentle weight of your time eases my mind.
    Brush aside the idea of time.
    Everything is plastic, and I
    I am happy to be in the moment the season presents.

    flaggwalkstheline...

    Not this time

    When the sweltering breath of summer rolled across the asphault
    I missed the glow of autumn

    And when winter dropped its weight upon the fields
    I wanted a spring thunderstorm

    I’m really in the shivering season of icicle lust now

    This time
    I won’t freezedry the sunshine of an unexpected giggle
    Not this time


    Gaberax...

    Brutal Samsara

    Winter murders Autumn;
    A piercing icicle to the heart
    Spring attacks with thunderstorm
    Ripping Winter all apart
    Relentless blazing sunshine;
    Summer scorches Spring to death
    Autumn kisses Summer
    With toxic lips on lethal breath
    Corners on the circle
    Stations along the wheel
    Life to Death to Life again
    Dancing to the endless reel


    Jon...

    Sweat for Snow



    The autumn moon, ochroid with its dust blight

    My world draws my sweat to make snow

    The sunshine and thunderstorm wither my crop

    I make ready for the harvest of icicles

    I, the farmer, with my scythe and pen.

    I, the poet, with ice cubes and gin.

    To cool my poison, a new crop is sewn

    To move the pen, new fulmination is grown


    BROWNINGS CHILDE...

    His Season

    Life springs forth, anew and curious.
    Trails untrodden, untaken, untried.
    Lessons learned, a pace so furious,
    As April thunderstorms collide.
    A world of wonderous work awaits,
    A willful one would soon descry.
    Though as the novelty abates,
    This wounderous world one will defy.

    Summer sunshine, and rich desire.
    A frantic race to experience all.
    Each end of the candle alive with fire.
    Carefree climb and ingnorant fall.
    Newfound passion, hot as the sun,
    Awkward lovers, entranced, enthralled.
    His legacy he attempts to emblazon,
    A disjointed message hastily scrawled.

    Then in the Autumn, the passion cools.
    His acorns, the squirrel methodically tolls.
    Content to watch the younger fools,
    Along his beaten path he strolls.
    He sits and thinks all by himself,
    Of how the pace of life has slowed,
    Of polished dreams upon a shelf,
    Unto his young they're now bestowed.

    Bitter winter, now has come.
    Weathered hands and aching bones.
    Icy wind, a howling thrum,
    Icicles long and gnarled have grown.
    Though death is nigh he has no fear,
    His life he's lived, his seed he's sown.
    His season, long, shall pass this year,
    As he came in, he leaves...alone.


    Cozener...

    Last autumn I saw an icicle glistening in the sunshine right after a thunderstorm. It was way fuckin' cool.
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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