New song by me

**LadyHitchhiker** · 10-27-2008 03:35 PM

I never want to see you fall
Long ugly tall
Though you may be
Myopic, focused on one thing
I never want to see you fall

And I will follow you
I will follow you
I will follow you until I fall
Till there is nothing left of me
And the beams refuse to be
I will follow you

Someone has to save the world
It might as well be me
But with the four, the five, the six of us
I won’t be alone you see.

But I never want to see you fall
Long ugly tall
Though you may be
Myopic, focused on one thing
I never want to see you fall

And I will follow you
I will follow you
I will follow you until I fall
Till there is nothing left of me
And the beams refuse to be
I will follow you

And I know
you wouldn’t fall
For me
I know you already fell
For me
And I know
It’s all a wheel you see
but you'll still leave me
but after all
please don't fall
do that for me

**Hannah** · 11-05-2008 11:38 AM

So, since you say this is a song - I propose that you attach an audio file of you singing it. Otherwise I can't really get the feel of it as a song.

**Jean** · 11-05-2008 11:37 PM

it's a good idea inasmuch as we all, without any doubt, would like to hear Liz singing; but the definition of the genre as "song" doesn't really require singing; for example, I don't think Walt Whitman actually sang (or at least I hope he didn't).