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    Default kid's poem...

    My oldest son...he's 4...has been into knights, dragons, trolls, etc lately. For the fun of it I put together a few little poems for him. My wife thinks I should draw some pictures and make childrens' books out of them. I might actually give that a shot but anyway, the kid really loves them. I thought I'd post one of them here. Maybe those of you that have kids would like to read it to yours. This one is my favorite of them.
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    I love it!
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    Very clever.
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    By saying you have kids, you are implying someone slept with you....COME ON!


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    I love the poem. I wish I had that style.
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    Cozener, it's a great present you made us all on your birthday!


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    You should make it into a children's book with pictures!!!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by LadyHitchhiker View Post
    You should make it into a children's book with pictures!!!!


    A GREAT idea!

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    What a lucky son you have.
    Cozener, it's good.

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    I'm glad y'all liked it. My son is getting to the point where he has much of them memorized and he goes around quoting them to random people

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    So in a way you are famous!!!
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    I love it! Seriously! Try and publish them with pictures!
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