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    Default Out Came The Son and Dried Up All The Rain

    All will be revealed to you, my friend
    Liberating the body farms with winds of sound
    A place with zero bends
    Creating drag that others will follow
    Forever unchanged by seasons' touch
    One direction
    Thousands of reasons for why not,
    One solution for why
    Billions upon billions merged in-between the graph
    All over the chart
    Your strings hung out like Her many serpent locks
    Keys in suspended fields and states of stone and glass
    One direction

    Fullscale helter skelter
    Ground zero created by your image
    Is there any way to force the sand through,
    At a much faster rate?
    Lunacy manufactured in glass
    Suspended in time

    My voids cast shadows of doubt
    As I watch the cracks appear season after season
    Proof that you have motion

    It so easy to dream;
    That need to relate

    Labels are made to peel away
    They are only masks
    That fester refrainment
    An attempt to circumvent the many faces
    To reach the soul
    A sole reason
    The point

    You can not see me
    Along this divided highway
    My intertextured thoughts threaten to give way
    Have a seat and observe the sparks
    Check the emptyness between the mystery
    And you will view the holes in the dome
    Like tiny holes of light in the darkness
    My syn
    You can not see me
    I am the night

    It has been this way forever
    Here in this hall of worlds
    Constantly we sift the ground around us
    And overlap others in the process
    Forming familiar patterns in our peripheral
    Some move away
    Others become more entrenched
    Forever fixed, able to weather the times
    And tides

    You were my question
    Something I could not quite catch
    And you were my mirror
    Something I hungered to sketch
    And you were my escape
    A wound I desired to patch

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    very nice

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    Very interesting, Willy!
    Does the poem go along with your av?
    (looks like your own son...?)
    Anyhow, a very thought-provoking write.
    Awesome to see you writing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ladysai View Post
    Very interesting, Willy!
    Does the poem go along with your av?
    (looks like your own son...?)
    Anyhow, a very thought-provoking write.
    Awesome to see you writing.
    Thank you!




    Yep, that was my son (AnDREW) in the previous av.




    The NEW son....
    (Orion)



    And, thank you, Alinda.
    Momma told me there would be DAYS like this. SHe is coming back around, though...to put things back the way they should be. HIS story? Nah...we've had enough of that.

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    Great poem dude

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    1...2...3...


    Thank You!
    Momma told me there would be DAYS like this. SHe is coming back around, though...to put things back the way they should be. HIS story? Nah...we've had enough of that.

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    I Love the following stanza!

    "Fullscale helter skelter
    Ground zero created by your image
    Is there any way to force the sand through,
    At a much faster rate?
    Lunacy manufactured in glass
    Suspended in time"


    Thank you sir or ma'am.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post


    Thank you sir or ma'am.
    You do realize that be Willy T, right?


    Very nice, Will!

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    Thank you very much, good sirs.
    Momma told me there would be DAYS like this. SHe is coming back around, though...to put things back the way they should be. HIS story? Nah...we've had enough of that.

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    I didn't realize that. Willy T...you may know me as Walter O'dim.


    And that's good stuff.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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