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    Default The Poems from Twilight

    Rise

    i lie awake at night

    searching for whats right

    looking intot the dark

    and searching for my heart

    trying to have something real

    somthing that makes me feel

    wanting to find my way

    hoping i’ll rise today

    hearing all the bad songs

    wondering how i got so wrong

    i thought i found the one

    now i hate what she has become

    figured out i am on my own

    I truly am all alone

    it is now known to all

    the writing is on the wall

    standing here on the ledge

    thinking of going over the edge
    If you love me then love me..

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    Twilight: thank you for posting this poem. Do you think you will post more? Maybe we could make this a catalogue thread for all your poems? If so, what would you like it to be called?

    EDITED: got your pm, renamed the thread, added you to the Index

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    Whole

    You are in my heart i find

    Forever wishing you were mine

    Every day since you left

    It is harder to catch my breath

    I'm supposed to be a man

    so why cant i drop the bottle from my hand

    visions of what we had run through my head

    i often dream and wish i were dead

    everyday i am slowly breaking apart

    everyday it is harder to pick up my heart

    torn open to my very core

    tring to find the stength to fet off the floor

    only wish to hear two simple words

    how is that so absurd

    when i remember what i was told

    my whole heart goes uterlly cold

    this is wrong i know it in my soul

    after this i may never be whole
    If you love me then love me..

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    Those are great poems. Looking forward to more

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    thank you
    If you love me then love me..

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    Completely Off-Topic , but I'm digging the Auron quote in your sig Twilight :thubsup:
    Quote Originally Posted by Girlystevedave View Post
    I'm just nodding my head the whole time thinking "ok, stop now, please."
    Some men just want to watch the world burn.

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    Shawn, I love your poems as much as I love you!

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    **PLEASE LEAVE THE ABOVE POST IN PLACE**

    We are going to see if the automated system catches it.
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    What ????? Whad I do?

    The answer is within

    all matter is energy, all energy is GOD

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    You lie with every word you say

    Your own words will make you pay

    I know the truth through and through

    It's so clear now, i dont need you

    All i used to feel was hate

    Thats not right, this must be fate

    Know that i will always carry you in my thoughts

    Till the day my body and mind stop

    Hoping my sorrow will forever end

    That my rage gloom and happy will blend

    Everything is now clear inside

    Who knows what I will find

    Now i go forward with ease

    And thanks for the memories

    We were never meant to be

    This i can finally see

    That is the reason you didn't stay

    You have sucessfully pushed me away
    If you love me then love me..

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    Default The best i can be

    Do you hear me thinking of things I dream about
    I wonder if your leaving and quickly running out
    Can you feel the beating of my heart when we talk
    Knowing that i cant run before i learn to walk
    There's no escaping what i feel
    At times i wonder if all this is real
    Tell me what I am to you am I big or small
    You think you know me but you haven't seen it all

    if you really walk away dont you think I'll feel sorrow
    dreaming of when your coming back till then I'm hollow
    Laying here sadly singing my sins for all to see
    Cant you understand this is not the best I can be

    Can you see me dreaming of you all night
    If this is wrong i dont wanna be right
    When it comes to me I think you have forgot
    At times i think you love me not
    thinking of you every night and day
    you and i together feels like the right way
    Being with you makes me totally fine
    you have my complete heart body soul and mind

    If you really walk away dont you think I'll feel sorrow
    dreaming of when your coming back till then I'm hollow
    Laying here sadly singing my sins for all to see
    Cant you understand this is not the best I can be
    If you love me then love me..

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    Shawn, your feeling it again arent you? I miss ya hunny. Hope your well!
    YO!

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    Default Pray for the Dead

    Pray for the Dead



    Everything has become wrong

    As I sit here writing this song

    I think of all that I miss

    While hoping I receive Death’s Kiss

    Waves crash against my soul

    My emotions have become cold

    Pray and the Dead save you

    Only cause they want to join you

    They crave the warmth of all

    Can you hear their screaming call

    The dead reach out to take your turn

    They know at the end of time everything burns
    If you love me then love me..

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    This reminds me of one of those poems that can spawn others if the author wishes.
    “Give me the sense to wonder, to wonder if I'm free."

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    Default Hurt

    Hurt


    I paint my to face to hide from you

    But when you look you see right through

    My lies my heart my fears and dreams

    Nothing here is what it seems

    The shadows always scream to me

    Always mocking all that I can see

    Your memory shouts out my name

    Telling me everything’s the same

    I wish I could run and scream and hide

    Fall into a dark black hole I wouldn’t mind

    Don’t talk of love my voice screams out

    I’ll rip from you your love and shout

    My heart it burns and rips apart

    Feeling has gone from my heart

    In my dreams I see you cry

    In my dreams I see you die
    Last edited by Yaksha; 02-14-2010 at 11:18 PM.
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    I know some of these may seem redundant but i wrote them all in a bad time in my life and they are a kind of therapy for me. Helps me cope and not go psycho.

    Someone

    Why did I fall for someone like you

    All the things you said were untrue

    I realise i could never trust after that

    The worst part, I kept coming back

    You take and take never give

    Never understood how you can live

    All you were was selfless and cold

    Next time I will do what I am told

    Why did I listen to someone like you

    No more forget it I'm through

    I hate you with everything I am

    You destroyed everything i was are am

    Whats done is done I am over it

    Doesnt mean I forget now will i forgive it

    Someone ripped me open in every way

    I hope to return the favor someday

    Thinking of you fills me with utter hate

    This wasnt meant to be there's no fate
    If you love me then love me..

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    Poetry is a great outlet for catharsis.

    I hope this hate leaves you soon...plenty of fish in the sea. No reason to STAY worked for too long over one.

    Feel free to cut loose here. More catharsis. Keep all of such works as they can be pieced together for a unique work or modified. If nothing else, inspiration for future works. Also... be prepared to read in the future and it is ok to laugh at yourself...just don't get rid of it.
    “Give me the sense to wonder, to wonder if I'm free."

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    good advice. and if you cant laugh at yourself you cant laugh at anyone
    If you love me then love me..

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    Ummm....yes, you can.
    The Awesomest fled across the desert and The Awesomer followed.

    If you rescue me
    I’ll be your friend forever


    I wish that I could write fiction, but that seems almost an impossibility. -howard phillips lovecraft (1915)



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    Laughing at self is fun.

    Laughing at Brice is mandatory!
    “Give me the sense to wonder, to wonder if I'm free."

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    The Awesomest fled across the desert and The Awesomer followed.

    If you rescue me
    I’ll be your friend forever


    I wish that I could write fiction, but that seems almost an impossibility. -howard phillips lovecraft (1915)



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    more to come
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    Well I am giving you my friends a treat. One of the first poems I ever wrote. Also one of the first I had published in the tenth grade so its short. I hope you like it

    Love

    Love is a feeling
    Love is a chase
    Love is believing
    Love is a race

    Love is a laugh
    Love is a shiver
    Love is a mountain
    Love is a river

    Love is forever
    Love is growing
    Love is eternal
    Love is knowing.
    If you love me then love me..

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    Nice.

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