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    why don't you post it here, too?

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    I just fear stealing Jackie's first line.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    I just fear stealing Jackie's first line.

    Jackie...I cry your pardon. I have two bursting out.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    The King is dead.

    His final wish given

    His kingdom in flames

    His army riven


    The King is dead

    His last wish never heard

    Cries of his subjects

    Leave his wish obscured


    The King is dead

    Was his dream so absurd?

    A defeated general

    Orders his body interred


    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    I KNOW this one needs some work but it just kinda fell out of me. I'll square it up at another time.









    The King is dead

    Most say he went to hell

    But Tchaikovsky had the news

    Tchaikovsky says he once lived at The Heartbreak Hotel


    I saw him in a Wisconsin 7-11

    But Tchaikovsky says he hit skid row

    Now he’s living with a Hound Dog

    In the Ghetto


    The King is dead

    But he took Carl Perkins’ Blue Suede Shoes

    Incarcerated, now pounding on The Jailhouse Rock

    Just like Sisyphus, he has A Mess of Blues.



    The King is dead

    He looks to the Hawaiian Sunset

    Thinking on a lonely Blue Moon

    Whispering to himself of the girl I Forgot To Remember To Forget


    The King is dead

    He exclaims to his Lord, I give All That I Am

    Ready for his Earth Angel,

    His parting words, Softly, As I Leave You to The Bosom of Abraham




    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    It's time for a bump of our poetry threads!

    Let's go with a winter/festive theme!
    New line...

    Time to celebrate!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    I'll get to it if I don't have a flood.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Time to Celebrate!
    A headache lie in wait.
    But, for now my thirst I'll sate
    And have the world upon my plate

    So raise a toast, and have some more
    Drink until we hit the floor.
    Tomorrow, we shall see for sure,
    That celebration is a whore.

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    Time for a new line.....

    In the eye of the storm....
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    In the eye of the storm...a prosthetic

    a contact, seawater it's saline solution.

    The better to see you with, my pretty!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    anyone else want to work off of "In the eye of the storm"?
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    In the eye of the storm
    We shall see
    Just who the survivor will be.

    In the eye of the storm
    In every way
    We fight the battle today

    In the eye of the storm
    The hurt the pain
    The terror that reigns

    In the eye of the storm
    Will you be there
    In this love affair

    In the eye of the storm
    I shall be
    The one that you will see

    In the eye of the storm
    We are one
    Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, stronger than you seem and smarter than you think.

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    The Tempest

    In the eye of the storm,
    Fleeting serenity envelopes the soul.
    A moment to clear my head,
    Before the tempest regains control.

    Chaos swirls on all four fronts.
    A deluge of emotion before and behind.
    White hot rage,
    Blackest despair,
    Envious green,
    Tangled,
    Entwined.

    A tiny vessel on an infinite sea,
    With darkness all around.
    Electrified, oppressive sky.
    Ominous thoughts abound.

    Tranquility depleted,
    The waves begin to swell,
    With cacophony of thunder,
    And screaming winds from hell.

    With heavy heart and burdened soul,
    I plunge into the night.
    Behind, the light leaves me,
    As the eye, it closes tight.
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    In the eye of the storm...a prosthetic

    a contact, seawater it's saline solution.

    The better to see you with, my pretty!

    SHIT this sucks...I must have been sober!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    So... maybe a new line?
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    OK, a new line...

    For he's a jolly good fellow
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    For He's a Jolly Good Fellow

    For he's a jolly good fellow
    Held up in the highest esteem
    A man that other men follow
    A leader raised up from the team

    With a charm that is rather deceiving
    And a smile that’s not easy to read
    With a few words he’ll have you believing
    And eager to follow his lead.

    He wades through disaster while smiling
    Worlds fall with a casual glance
    His stories are strange and beguiling
    Fortunes garnered and squandered by chance

    He’s quick with a word to inspire
    He’s first with a slap on the back
    He laughs when the outlook is dire
    And sings when the forecast is black

    He’d walk with you right through Death’s hollow
    And stick with you, right to the end
    Yes, he’s a jolly good fellow
    And I’m damned proud to call him my friend.
    Grrr...

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    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    A God Among Men

    For he is a jolly good fellow,
    Least thats what he'd have you believe.
    A facade of a smile, and a "Hello",
    With maniacal hate up his sleeve.

    He's tidy and neat in appearance,
    Yet inside, he boils with rage.
    A master of more adherence,
    The beast he keeps in his cage.

    A spurious imposture by day,
    Until he returns to his den.
    At work, by the rules he will play,
    But at home, he's a God among men.

    He quietly tallies his victims.
    He dreams of his glorious day.
    No jury will ever convict him,
    As he'll die soon after his prey.

    And after his bloodthirst is slaked,
    Confused and bewildered they'll be.
    A life of camaraderie faked,
    For a jolly good fellow was he.
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    Thinking on this one.
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    A new line perhaps?

    Deep within the darkness....
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    Deep within the Darkness
    the dreams come
    wrenching me from peace

    Deep within the Darkness
    the shadows come
    I turn my head in fear

    Deep within the Darkness
    the spirits come
    calling me home

    Deep within the Darkness

    I sleep
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    I like it, very thought provoking. Abstract enough to allow for interpretation.
    Sloth Love Chunk

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    Thanks! I was going for abstract!
    Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.

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    A new line perhaps?


    "After such a failure..."
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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