Thirty Nine Words For Toilet
Porcelain thrones glisten
Especially now as the Lysol,
Acidic lemon,
Dries.
Thundering away in some old box,
Not living not empathic,
Just turning and swirling.
Some despondent john
Sits there, sways listlessly and
Watches the blue go down again.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
I love it!
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
Glad you love it--I started writing and the only thing I could think of happened to be a toilet.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
well, it worked
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
haha.
Bravo! I enjoyed it very much. Very original.
"Help me out here
All my words are falling short
And there's so much I want to say"
Thankya. Now let's see some other ones maybe.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
No way to top a toilet poem!!!
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
Only in your opinion, Jon. I guess I kinda stole your thunder with my toilet ode, though.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
Naw...while my name is Jon I will find a way to work sheep into the poem .
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
OK. Lemony sheep! W00t.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
Nothing beats a sheep with a fresh scent.
"Help me out here
All my words are falling short
And there's so much I want to say"
may I request 3 new words please. No one can top a toilet poem!!
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
good point...
raven
sobriety
fuschia
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
Unusual Grain
Ashen and sullen,
Sandra contemplated her reflection in the water.
As it danced and swayed,
She consumed her muffin tops.
Silently overhead, a jet black
Raven passed casting shadows of doubt
And inebriated movement to mice.
After its sullen passing,
As sullen as Sandra's state of mind,
A new sobriety came unto the mice.
Newly revived and not imbibed,
The rodents scurried away from Sandra,
A much larger raven clad not in black,
But in a fuchsia and burnt umber
With a trim of gold ochre.
Much more terrifying.
Sandra finished her muffin tops and left to go back to work for $17/hour.
My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.
The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.
loved it! muffin tops!
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
sun sets, fuchsia
raven wings carry night's fears
sobriety dawns
thank you ladysai! it's high time someone came up with a haiku here!
Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)
bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You're quite welcome, Jean.
it's ladysai!
come around more, love!
thanks for adding to the poetry... it's been a little poetically quiet around here lately.
Buddy, you think you look strong? You’re wearing a cape.
Originally Posted by Jean
thank you ladysai! it's high time someone came up with a haiku here!
Ahem...
http://www.thedarktower.org/palaver/...&postcount=107
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
Jon, that was more than two months ago!
Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)
bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I see now!
"What have you done for me lately?"
All that's left of what we were is what we have become.
I liked your gay man of steel haiku.
Happy Easter to the Turtleback Lane poets!
thank you love!happy Easter to you too!
Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)
bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posting Permissions
Reply With Quote
