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    This is a name I'm fond of using, Winter Black. Here will be a collection of my poetry and lyrics, with possible additions of sound files, should I feel like reading or singing my poetry and lyrics. Though I don't think that will happen too often. XD I hate my voice.

    I'll start you off with my three favorites:

    Wonderland

    So cold in a winter wonderland.
    Out in the snow, snow like sand.
    But sand won’t melt, except into glass.
    Snow turns to water, water helps the grass.
    So winter is good, but rain is better.
    Because in the rain you won’t freeze...
    So I love the warm weather!


    Chaos Queen

    Chaos Queen, lovely vision,
    Trickster of no Mortal myth,
    I shuffle my cards, I have a question,
    Eris... Eris... Give me a message!

    Discordian knowledge, steeped in bullshit,
    Erisian love, with Chaos on top,
    I feel compelled to move my dagger,
    Five cards, a message from the horses mouth,

    Mistress of disorder, apple, Kallisti,
    Thing's'll work out, have faith,
    Feel safe, no fear, no doubt,
    Don't sabotage yourself,

    Who says things can't be what they aren't?
    In Discordian rule, all would reverse,
    And chasing Dragons, through rainbow forests,
    I give myself to you...

    I give myself to you.


    All is One

    The weight of a thousand worlds
    weighs heavy on your

    shoulders.
    The breath of a billion souls
    passes lightly through your

    lungs.
    The sight of a googleplex of viewpoints
    passes by your

    eyes.
    The feeling of innumerable touches
    take flight on your

    fingers.
    All is one; one is all.
    Ball in it all; all in a
    ball.
    But lost if you drop it.

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    Every time I read it, I am so deeply touched by your Wonderland... somewhat old-fashioned and naive, it has some quality of purity and wisdom and love, although love isn't really mentioned here (except for warm weather)

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Dear God, Can.
    Wonderland... is simply amazing.

    Roland would have understood.

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    Everyone seems to like that one, particularly. I don't remember why I wrote it, or technically even when. It was just in my book, in my handwriting. I'm glad, though, because its a pretty good piece.
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    I liked Chaos Queen the most, this line in particular:
    And chasing Dragons, through rainbow forests,

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    Thank you. I like that line a lot, myself.

    I'll post a new one in a moment.
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    Rainy Days

    Now bad music,
    Chocolate almond on the floor...
    Quick, quick,
    Call in sick,
    Before the time has come and gone.

    Rainy days,
    Call for me...
    Come and stay,
    Fall for me...


    Now, Goodlooking, use it..!
    Secret plan to win my heart
    Today,
    Don't go away
    Until my heart moves on.

    Rainy days,
    Fall for me.
    Come away,
    Call to me...

    Rainy days,
    My love.
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    As Fruno requested, I have added to Rainy Days. But rather than edit the post, I feel I will just repost the whole thing.

    Rainy Days

    Now bad music,
    Chocolate almond on the floor...
    Quick, quick,
    Call in sick,
    Before the time has come and gone.

    Rainy Days,
    Call for me...
    Come and stay,
    Fall for me...

    Now, Goodlooking, use it..!
    Secret plan to win my heart
    Today,
    Don't go away
    Until my heart moves on.

    Rainy Days,
    Fall for me.
    Come away,
    Call to me...

    Grey skies
    Above blue eyes,
    Old but young again
    When a smile dares
    To come.

    Rainy Days,
    Shove me...
    Rainy Days,
    Love me...

    Kind heart works in
    Harsh light,
    My heart finds it
    Too bright,
    I need your words to see...

    Rainy Days,
    Weep for me...
    Rainy Days,
    Keep me...

    You know me, but...
    Don't know me all the same.
    Sanity isn't our happiness,
    On society I blame
    This unfair situation.

    Rainy Days,
    Play me.
    Rainy Days,
    Save me.

    To tango in the morning,
    But then to waltz
    All night
    Robs me of my judgement,
    Perpetuates my plight.

    Rainy Days,
    Just hit me..!
    Rainy Days
    Just fit me.

    Confusion
    And sickness of the heart
    Make me want to
    Cry aloud
    And make me wish to start...

    Rainy Days,
    Blame me.
    Rainy Days,
    Shame me...

    I'd run the world over
    Once, twice, a hundred times!
    If only you would
    See ME!
    The same as I see you.

    Rainy Days,
    Show me.
    Rainy Days,
    Know me..!

    So take my hand and
    Dance with me!
    Because if you do
    You just might see things
    MY way!

    Rainy Days,
    Slay me!
    Rainy Days,
    Pray for me!
    Rainy Days,
    Know me! and
    Rainy Days,
    Show me! And
    Rainy Days,
    Keep me! And
    Rainy Days,
    Weep for me!
    On Rainy Days,
    My love.
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    I like the Chaos Queen, especially the line "Trickster of no Mortal myth,"
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Thank you. ^^ I'm very fond of that poem, myself.
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    A few oldies.


    Unique

    I want somebody just like me,
    but there is no one like me.
    I am incomplete.
    I am unique.
    I must find my other half.
    He... She.
    Let not gender blind a soul to a soulmate.
    Let me be genderblind, and blissful.
    A child to find her other half
    In a garden of the full moon's glow
    The time is now.
    Go.




    My Warrior

    Where is the way to my Warriors heart?
    I feel like I'm groping in the dark,
    To find a way to get inside,
    I fear that I shall never find,
    The way to make my soldier happy,
    I'll be myself, just and dandy,
    If he, my fighter, doesn't love me,
    I'll find a new love, let it be.
    And what is the way to my Warrior?
    Not a gentle man is he.
    But to me his kindness never ends,
    And I'll send love to my Warrior...
    And to me, my Warriors love, he sends.




    Cry

    Bicker, whine, like children, cry,
    Love, hate, pick on unimportant traits,
    Don’t call me names, don’t drag us down,
    Immature, don’t come around,
    Please bring the ego’s down, the sense of that which is true, up,
    I can’t stand the fighting, and I love you...
    And running through this so-called life,
    In you I found my sanctuary,
    My self-esteem, my sense of self,
    The love of my life, the love for my life,
    The understanding of family.
    Don’t hurt me, don’t tear us apart,
    You’re smarter than that, I love you deeply,
    You’re better than that, I know you’ll see,
    And in passing thought, I say, my love,
    Please make it all go back to right,
    Please don’t tear us apart,
    Don’t break us down,
    Kill your ego,
    Love.
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    These are all okay. Sometimes the poems seem to follow schemes that are too obvious, IMO, but they aren't bad.
    My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.

    The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.

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    Thats funny, because I never actually write with schemes in mind. They just end up that way.
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    Weird--funny how that works. Rainy Days still rules and should be recorded as a song.
    My favorite bands can kick your favorite bands' asses.

    The horizon is right and motionless like the EKG of a dying woman.

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    You do something with it, then. I dunno.
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    Oh such good writing Can!!
    All that's left of what we were is what we have become.

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    Thank you, Jon! ^_^

    I'm just about to post a bit of Prose that I'm still working on.
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    D'oh! Not good for him, is it?

    "I aim to misbehave."
    -- Malcolm Reynolds

    "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I soar."
    -- Hoban Washburne

    "What does that make us?"
    "Big damn heroes, sir."
    "Ain't we just."
    -- Malcolm Reynolds and Zoe Washburne

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    No, not at all. Heh. There's more, but its not a finished piece of the story yet.
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    Wa-hoo! Great stuff. Seems almost like a CSI: Miami episode.

    "I aim to misbehave."
    -- Malcolm Reynolds

    "I am a leaf on the wind. Watch how I soar."
    -- Hoban Washburne

    "What does that make us?"
    "Big damn heroes, sir."
    "Ain't we just."
    -- Malcolm Reynolds and Zoe Washburne

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    I've never watched a CSI: anything in my life. I hate those kinds of shows. XD I watch Raines, and I watch Monk, and sometimes I watch Missing. But I haven't seen that in almost 8 months. I hate cop shows. XD
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