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    I ride on metal
    I am made of metal
    sometimes by fire
    sometimes by wire
    my throat speaks with a voice
    that is the last thing
    some lonely people hear

    the Earth shakes when my voice knells
    speaking to the sleeping
    in that place in the mind
    where madness dwells
    in close proximity a living hell
    my body an empty shell
    my nose curved like the belly of a whale











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    taking a stab in the dark here : a bullet?

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    nope
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    A train?

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    ATG...there is a riddles section.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mia/susannah View Post
    A train?
    correct.
    The fuckers keep me up all night!



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    ATG...there is a riddles section.

    We need you!
    OMFG, this site has too many sub-forums!
    "The Constitution shall never be construed....to prevent the people of the United States who are peaceable citizens from keeping their own arms" (Samuel Adams, Debates and Proceedings in the Convention of the Commonwealth of Massachusetts, 86-87)

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    Quote Originally Posted by ATG View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by mia/susannah View Post
    A train?
    correct.
    The fuckers keep me up all night!



    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    ATG...there is a riddles section.

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    OMFG, this site has too many sub-forums!
    Well it WAS a poem... but it was more of a riddle.

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    As part of you official interrogation. I must ask you to explain:

    "in close proximity a living hell
    my body an empty shell"


    (I'm not being an ass or challenging you... just curious. we oft do this in riddles.)
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    ATG: do you want it to stay here, or to be moved to Riddles?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    As part of you official interrogation. I must ask you to explain:

    "in close proximity a living hell
    my body an empty shell"


    (I'm not being an ass or challenging you... just curious. we oft do this in riddles.)
    we'll see what ATG really meant, but when he says they keep him up all night I assume that is what he means by the "in close proximity a living hell." As in, the train whistle, when it is close, is the living hell. The "empty shell" part I think we all get. Was that it ATG?

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    Quote Originally Posted by R_of_G View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by Jon View Post
    As part of you official interrogation. I must ask you to explain:

    "in close proximity a living hell
    my body an empty shell"


    (I'm not being an ass or challenging you... just curious. we oft do this in riddles.)
    we'll see what ATG really meant, but when he says they keep him up all night I assume that is what he means by the "in close proximity a living hell." As in, the train whistle, when it is close, is the living hell. The "empty shell" part I think we all get. Was that it ATG?


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    prob bc i also have to deal with the living hell of trains running too close to my home

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    I live about 2 miles from the tracks. But we're on a hill.
    There is something random about the whistles, and something that perhaps triggers my alarm response.
    Not a single night goes by when I am able to sleep, even with ear-plugs. My wife is not bothered but many a night I lie awake on the couch imagining an engineers head in my cross hairs.
    "The Constitution shall never be construed....to prevent the people of the United States who are peaceable citizens from keeping their own arms" (Samuel Adams, Debates and Proceedings in the Convention of the Commonwealth of Massachusetts, 86-87)

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    Most of our riddles are poems too!

    Jean: its really up to you guys if you want to keep it here or move it to Solved Riddles @ golgotha, only active riddles stay in Road To Fair Day.

    ATG: Riddles Forum, have a look if you're into puzzles
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    Thanks, but I suck at riddles.

    I trust the mods to put things where they go, and the pm's are a nice courtesy but really not needed. Just do as ye see fit.


    Poems, poetry, prose and song writing are things I do dabble in.


    As far as this ' riddle ' it had been spinning around my head, and as I lay in bed, listening to the maddening wail of the trains in the terminal I think of Blaine.
    "The Constitution shall never be construed....to prevent the people of the United States who are peaceable citizens from keeping their own arms" (Samuel Adams, Debates and Proceedings in the Convention of the Commonwealth of Massachusetts, 86-87)

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    Quote Originally Posted by ATG View Post
    I live about 2 miles from the tracks. But we're on a hill.
    There is something random about the whistles, and something that perhaps triggers my alarm response.
    Not a single night goes by when I am able to sleep, even with ear-plugs. My wife is not bothered but many a night I lie awake on the couch imagining an engineers head in my cross hairs.
    I live about a mile, give or take, and on a hill as well, I seems like the train whistle is right outside my window, drives me crazy as well.

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