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    Dear Virtual Ka-Tet,


    Those of you who enjoy poetry, specifically haiku, may enjoy looking through my collection here.

    I welcome and encourage feedback from this refined audience.

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    But ... I don't like poetry.

    But I like you! So ... I'm torn, lol.

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    Five ... seven ... four?

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    Lol. I appreciate you fighting the dislike of poetry to take a look (I'm actually posting a short story on Friday).

    Man, it appears you got me. When I say style, it comes out as two syllables, even after looking it up I'm having difficulty agreeing with one syllable. Thanks for the attention to detail, my friend, I will be sure to fix it. Admittedly, this is the second time I've been off, but the first time it was 5-7-6.

    Thanks for reading, Shannon! I hope all is well.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Stebbins View Post
    Dear Virtual Ka-Tet,


    Those of you who enjoy poetry, specifically haiku, may enjoy looking through my collection here.

    I welcome and encourage feedback from this refined audience.

    "refined audience???" You posted this at the Dark Tower.org.

    Please check your url.
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    RF: I dig it, dinh. Meeting SK is still on my bucket list.

    Jon: Well my definition of refined is no doubt unconventional, to say the least. It's refined in that it has had a lot of experience and doesn't just automatically like mainstream art; it has its own brain. I also feel the tastes here have significant overlap with the things I like and am influenced by.

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