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    The following poems were written by my daughter. She has a vivid imagination and would like others opinions that are not tainted by friendship. In other words, her friends are afraid to hurt her feelings if they are critical of the work or fear she will get mad if they don't like them. So have fun with these and let me know what you think.

    How do you describe color
    How do you describe a color
    You see that's what I ponder
    How can you tell a blind man
    His skin is tan
    Or that his blood is red
    The color that I dread
    Or tell him the leaves are green
    a color he's never seen
    Or that it turns brown
    The color of the ground
    Can you tell him the color of a fire hydrant is silver
    He can just call it liver
    can you tell him the color of milk
    Is the same as silk
    You see how can you describe a color
    I guess I just have to ponder.


    Sister's Secret
    Erie screams echo the halls
    Blood runs down the satin walls
    Mother and father on the floor
    Big Sister settles the score
    Little brother went insane
    There is nothing left to gain
    Father and mother now sleep in the sea
    Oh how she wished it couldn't be
    Mother and father saw no other
    But a perfect little brother
    She doesn't regret what she did
    As long as long as she can save the kid
    As the blood leaked from the wound
    The town was no longer doomed
    Now she sits all alone
    The whole town wants her stone.


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    Wow, very deep, mainly the last one. Very talented. Loved them.

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    bears like!

    Ask not what bears can do for you, but what you can do for bears. (razz)
    When one is in agreement with bears one is always correct. (mae)

    bears are back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    You should be extremely proud as your daughter is very talented. Enjoyed both the poems. Good stuff!

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    Oh she will be very pleased to hear that...she has other things tinkering in her mind so when she has them down I will post them. Thanks for the comments.


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    I IS CRAZY

    I is crazy
    I is random
    I can not be explained
    you can not comprehend my thoughts
    you never know what i am thinking
    I never know what I will do next
    sometimes my minds is a mystery to me
    Can you guess what I'll do next?
    NO, no one can
    I am a mystery to myself
    No one can understand


    CAN ANYONE SEE

    Can you see the face behind the lies?
    Can you hear the cries in each sigh?
    I'm hear, I'm hear!
    The real me
    Who longs to come out.
    No one sees
    and no one hears
    I'm all alone in the darkness of my mind.
    I wish to be free
    I wish to be me
    but I fear people will leave me with a stare.
    Can no one help me?
    Can no one see me?
    Does no one care for me?


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    These are very good. How old is your daughter?

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    She just turned 17 on April 2nd.


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    My daughter still amazes me everyday...she did this at school...even though it isn't poetry...I believe it is worth being here

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