Well i have been thinking about starting to write my own story for a while, (not sure how long it will be at the moment) which will be my 1st attempt at doing so since i stopped doing English at school 8 years ago and today i have finally taken the plunge
So i wondered if anyone had any tips for me and if possible could read my 1st paragraph (whish is below) giving me your thoughts on it
There seems to be one moment in everyone’s lives that they can remember as though it happened yesterday, a moment that’s so fresh in your mind that you could close your eyes and pick out the tiniest details. You can set the scene for anyone with the time of day, who you are with and where, even if the birds are tweeting their blissful ballads to the sun. All because time stood still, seconds feeling like minutes or even hours consequently cementing facts into the subconscious. Unfortunately though, this length of time isn’t always the happiest of memories and this was the case when I was woken 5 years ago today by the cheesiest of mobile alarm tones. Little was I to know that this phone call had started a chain of events that would change my perception of reality, bending the barrier between what’s real and what isn’t, changing me forever.
Thanks
Tom