Good Work, B.C. No wonder it was published.
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Good Work, B.C. No wonder it was published.
Your welcome, McLovin
Good to see some new stuff from you, BC. I rather like it.
Yes. I don't often write horror poetry but when I do it flows like a flash flood and I struggle to keep it restrained so that it can be somewhat artful.
I have always love horror poetry! The Vigil was right down my alley.
B.C. as to writing The Vigil; was it difficult or did it flow from you like water?
You ran so fast, you nearly shook your past,
But even so you wound up late.
A great line and, as a whole, a great tribute!
I know this feeling. I lost a father and am sick of hearing how proud he would be about...
Yes...the world goes on despite one's misery.
Nice work, B.C!
Great imagery and image. Consider this for winter poetry contest.
"But now I see the team was me"
I rather like that line.
This poem has such a shape. I love the message but shaping is hard to do well.
Good job!