why does that fish have human bottom teeth?!?!
(neat poem btw)
Type: Posts; User: flaggwalkstheline
why does that fish have human bottom teeth?!?!
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why does that fish have human bottom teeth?!?!
(neat poem btw)
Oh hell yes, that is a spectacular poem:thumbsup:
Oh hell yes, that is a spectacular poem:thumbsup:
Interesting poem, to me the slant rhyming felt...
Interesting poem, to me the slant rhyming felt natural but the meter felt a little stiff, very old fashioned iambic which lends it a certain solidity, I like it regardless:thumbsup: It's very...
poems that write themselves are the best:thumbsup:
poems that write themselves are the best:thumbsup:
ooo
thats a very interesting poem
It feels airy...
ooo
thats a very interesting poem
It feels airy but theres a heavyness to the ending...
you put alot into something with only 11 lines:clap:
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Oh hell yeah:rock:
Oh hell yeah:rock: