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I'm looking forward to a sea shanty from you.

Hmmm...Now I'm hearing it to the tune of Rat Salad AND Electric Funeral. But it seems more like a War Pigs tune. But Jean was right about the whole Sabbath idea.

Aquaman was my favorite as a young boy.

It has been some time since I wrote anything.

This particular poem is...well, about 1/4 of it was quite forced. I want to get back to writing but I see there will be "pains." I figure a...

Thank you. I didn't see those things.

This is my first work in I think...over a year. I have a few lines in files here and there but this is the only thing close to complete. I do need feedback. I fear I may have lost something. I think...

You simply must. We love variety here. If you cannot find your notebook; start a thread, write a poem, and keep writing. Perhaps then your notebook will show up.

Thank you sir.

Just some snippets I may use some day...somewhere. Any input or suggestions are most welcome. I am torn on where to take these works or to take bits and pieces and make several works.



The...

A work in progress. Please do not judge too harshly...yet.



The Human Kidney stone


So they say in a loving tone “This too shall pass.”

A famous most phrase we all hear and...

Biochemical Beasts of Burden

Symbolism of my current predicament. Good eye to catch that.

Hope the lover of fishermen

A cruel lover we call Hope

Hope… the wish of racers

Perhaps the game will bite

Perhaps the car will finish first

Thank you.

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I see hidden things on people’s faces.

She hates her tight, cramped, fashionable new shoes

The next...

The Beach With No Ocean.



Fettered, tattered limbs cry out to be free

Muted voices seek an audience for grievance

A lone “savior” comes from the mighty West

Thank you both!

Mother and Winter Divorce



MARCH!

A command

A strong verb.

Michael Jackson’s other glove


Feeling lonely; a little out of place

Like a gumball in a gravel pit

With no one around to chew it.

Home alone; a vast, empty space

Thank you. I find slant rhyme very awkward.