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    Thanks, Jean! Glad to be back. Missed you guys a...

    Thanks, Jean! Glad to be back. Missed you guys a lot and wondered how everyone was getting along..This group occupied a lot of my time and helped get me through some really rough times, so I felt...
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    Wow I have not been on here in a year and a...

    Wow I have not been on here in a year and a half!!?? Dude! Hope everyone is doing well, and hope to get caught back up with some of yall and see what I've been missin'! I posted the next part here,...
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    Wow I have not been on here ina year and a...

    Wow I have not been on here ina year and a half!!?? Dude! Hope everyone is doing well, and hope to get caught back up with some of yallaand see what I've been missin'! I posted the next part here,...
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    Back when I was fervent on getting my first work...

    Back when I was fervent on getting my first work published I was in your shoes. A literary company contacted me, wanted a synopsis, liked it, and wanted a bit more so I emailed it to them. They, of...
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    Here is a little bit of the next chapter I just...

    Here is a little bit of the next chapter I just got through with...more to come.


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    When the paltry rays of sunlight pierced their way into the windows of the jail, the time was nearly nine...
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    Cool. And thanks! As far as the motioning...

    Cool. And thanks!

    As far as the motioning went, I said that "the marshall motioned for him to lean closer" In my head it was a motion with his head, not hand, but coulda been clearer there, I...
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    *OK, All I have so far. Haven't worked on it in...

    *OK, All I have so far. Haven't worked on it in quite a while, but plan on gettin' back at it soon. Suggestions or criticisms, as always, are always welcome...(hint hint)*


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    Thick and foggy...
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    9. The band of men rounded a hill and Vincent...

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    The band of men rounded a hill and Vincent stopped his horse. If Steele was down there like he said then there would be a firefight. Even Steele stood no chance against fourteen armed men. And...
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    8. "You two have no clue how bad you jest...

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    "You two have no clue how bad you jest screwed yerselves. When Steel comes to town ain't no judge or badge that'll protect ye."
    "Well then if'n he plans on comin' in this here office I suggest...
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    hey! it's a special stump! With a gun-drawing...

    hey! it's a special stump! With a gun-drawing claw-thingy! Or maybe he had both in his right hand! :idea:
    Thanks, man! I never realized I flubbed that up. Will go back and edit in the real story as...
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    6. Chester took the watch from his pocket and...

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    Chester took the watch from his pocket and looked at it for several moments before rising from behind the desk and walking past the locked cells. Jack had been right, and eerily so. There had...
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    I have only about 20 pages left in what might...

    I have only about 20 pages left in what might possibly be one of the best three books I have ever picked up. And that includes anything King has written. And for me to say that is a grand thing, as...
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    And some more:...

    And some more:
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    James Steele's features never wavered. His mouth never hinted at a smile, and his...
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    Thanks so much, old friend! As always, your...

    Thanks so much, old friend! As always, your comments are honest and true, and I appreciate the praise! Here's some more:...
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    3. The campfire popped and cracked as the...

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    The campfire popped and cracked as the breeze blew through the burning embers and partially consumed blend of dry brush and deadfall. Paul could fianlly feel some vestige of radiating heat...
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    2. The door to the office swung open and...

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    The door to the office swung open and banged hollowly on the frame behind it, scaring the slumbering deputy and causing his half-empty cup of coffee to spill onto the plank floor next to the...
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    work in progress... book 4

    This one is a western that I began last fall. Haven't worked on it for a while, and figured I'd post what I had so far and gauge some reaction before I continue. Here is the first of 10 chapters....
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    Chapter 25 Steven woke to find no sign of...

    Chapter 25
    Steven woke to find no sign of Deanna. He had been out for only a few short minutes, but she was gone, nonetheless. Joe peered at him from inside the shuttle where Anita still sat in her...
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    Wow. Thanks for sharing your stories, guys. And...

    Wow. Thanks for sharing your stories, guys. And remember that no matter how bad you think your life was, or is, there are always people out there who have it so much worse. I find this to be true all...
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    Sticky: I'm amazed that the Dark Half finished below...

    I'm amazed that the Dark Half finished below Lisey's Story! :panic:

    but yes, great job! And #1 is my personal #1, so yay!
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