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NPRussell
04-30-2009, 02:08 AM
Hi all,

I thought my second post should be some kind of writing, so here goes!

Essential Obsession

I share my mind with appetite
Therapy from time to time
Contamination inhalation
Of the habitual kind

Cowed by what I have become
Slave to essential obsession
Hating me and only me
Eyes open yet I cannot see

I hold myself in disdain
Deemed esteemed insane
I'm inclined to find solution
In my own retribution

I tell myself I'm fine
Am I just spinning lies?
I vowed to you I would
Why can't I end it now for good?

Odetta
04-30-2009, 06:22 AM
:rock:

BROWNINGS CHILDE
04-30-2009, 05:58 PM
cool...

Nice to have another poet.
You should explore the "Bird and Bear and Hare and Fish" threads as there are many poetry related topics.

flaggwalkstheline
04-30-2009, 06:48 PM
I very much like the verbal rhythmn u set down in ur poem

Jon
08-02-2009, 11:48 AM
Anymore, Nipsey