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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:02 AM
i want to thank everyone who read these poems. but they are no longer going to be here. since i can't delete a thread, and since they are mine, i just deleted them individually. i truly appreciate you taking the time to read them and hope that they brought some measure of, if not joy, then contemplation to your world.

The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:03 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:04 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
08-02-2008, 01:05 AM
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Jon
08-03-2008, 08:36 PM
I like your style. Bold! "Gravity" stands on it's own, "untitled" is bold enough to ask the question of dualism.

Jean
08-03-2008, 10:22 PM
I can't comment on the rest of it, because I don't understand shit about non-formal poetry; but that Silver Moonlight haiku is a real killer. It has never left my mind since I first saw it.

Jon
08-03-2008, 10:51 PM
I find non-formal poetry a challenge and admire those who do it well. (I'm not much of a haiku fan though.)

The Lady of Shadows
08-12-2008, 10:01 PM
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The Lady of Shadows
09-30-2008, 03:41 PM
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Jon
09-30-2008, 10:26 PM
I rather like that Ma'am!

The Lady of Shadows
09-30-2008, 10:31 PM
thanks jon. deception has been much on my mind of late.

Jon
09-30-2008, 11:02 PM
thanks jon. deception has been much on my mind of late.


Grrr... yeah... tough for me to not call some out given their history.

The Lady of Shadows
12-09-2008, 11:02 PM
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The Lady of Shadows
12-09-2008, 11:19 PM
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Sam
12-10-2008, 05:17 AM
Some very good work here ts. Very good, especially the haiku. They have some powerful emotion in them.

The Lady of Shadows
12-11-2008, 01:08 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
02-17-2009, 12:23 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
02-17-2009, 12:26 AM
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The Lady of Shadows
04-24-2009, 02:40 PM
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Jon
04-28-2009, 12:17 AM
I reckon I lost track of this thread. Good works...keep writing.

The Lady of Shadows
04-28-2009, 09:58 AM
:blush:

say thankya