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Stebbins
01-26-2016, 05:22 PM
Dear Virtual Ka-Tet,


Those of you who enjoy poetry, specifically haiku, may enjoy looking through my collection here (http://derekfronczak.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku).

I welcome and encourage feedback from this refined audience.

Shannon
01-26-2016, 06:56 PM
But ... I don't like poetry. :(

But I like you! So ... I'm torn, lol.

Shannon
01-26-2016, 06:58 PM
Put on Chuck Taylors
Then pad through the neighborhood
In flat-soled style

Five ... seven ... four? ;)

Stebbins
01-27-2016, 09:21 AM
Lol. I appreciate you fighting the dislike of poetry to take a look (I'm actually posting a short story on Friday).

Man, it appears you got me. When I say style, it comes out as two syllables, even after looking it up I'm having difficulty agreeing with one syllable. Thanks for the attention to detail, my friend, I will be sure to fix it. Admittedly, this is the second time I've been off, but the first time it was 5-7-6.

Thanks for reading, Shannon! I hope all is well.

Randall Flagg
01-28-2016, 12:47 PM
Stephen King sign this
Look me in the eye also
Seven seconds up

Jon
01-28-2016, 11:03 PM
Dear Virtual Ka-Tet,


Those of you who enjoy poetry, specifically haiku, may enjoy looking through my collection here (http://derekfronczak.blogspot.com/search/label/Haiku).

I welcome and encourage feedback from this refined audience.


"refined audience???" You posted this at the Dark Tower.org.

Please check your url.

Stebbins
01-29-2016, 12:10 AM
RF: I dig it, dinh. Meeting SK is still on my bucket list.

Jon: :lol: Well my definition of refined is no doubt unconventional, to say the least. It's refined in that it has had a lot of experience and doesn't just automatically like mainstream art; it has its own brain. I also feel the tastes here have significant overlap with the things I like and am influenced by.

To Whom It May Interest: My first short story, "Therapy (http://derekfronczak.blogspot.com/2016/01/therapy-short-story.html)," is live.