Crimson King Poem

[al'Lan Mandragoran]

I actually wrote this poem for someone close to me, but I figure since it has to do with the Dark Tower in a slight way I'll plaster it on here. It isn't that good, but it just sorta came out after I started. (Oh, and by the way... it was entirely inspired by All_Hails sig.)

O Discordia!
Thou generous darkness!
Breaker of chains!
Seer of chaos!

Shine!
Shine thou Crimson beauty!
Shed thy light upon us!
Thy truth is to be praised!

Come, all seekers!
Come and join the dark!
Submerge in it's endless depths!
Worship the Eye of the King!

Serve the King!
Serve and serve him gladly!
The Beams fall to his mercy!
The Tower pales in his shadow!

Heir of Eld!
Ruler of all!
Tamer of the multiverse!
Toppler of order!

Breaker of the old way!
Father of bitter truth!
All shall kneel and say:
All hail the Crimson King!

[Wuducynn]

:D I'm surprised I missed this. :harrier:

[Mr. Rabbit Trick]

:D I'm surprised I missed this. :harrier:

We all are. :cowboy:

[Storyslinger]

:thumbsup:

[/k/ommando]

Good job. Also a bit creepy that when I started reading this "Mars the Bringer of War" started playing from my radio.

[mia/susannah]

That is a very well written poem. Nice job!!!

[cozener]

I like it... :)

[BillyxRansom]

dig it a lot. :)

[Pelo]

BRAVO! :clap:

I enjoyed it big-big.

[The Lady of Shadows]

wow. nicely written. :clap:

[razz]

:clap:
Encore!
Encore!
i once tried writing a poem about the Crimson King.
it started out:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

then i got writers block.

[JQ The Gunslinger]

:clap:
Encore!
Encore!
i once tried writing a poem about the Crimson King.
it started out:
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

then i got writers block.

Hahahaha thats funny